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« on: January 30, 2008, 07:06:29 pm » |
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Alright since I've been on a creative streak mandated by my english teacher I figured I'd share what I have been writing in class with the internet community, to once again alter the image you have of me,....
Mom: Flash of lightning through the air The beat of rain begins to drone Howling wind through my hair Help me god, Mom is home
Sins: Seven Deadly Sins Await 'round the bend So I packed a bag and took a trip To make my life amends
Jeff Hardy XP: Whisper in the wind Silence settles through Now he has the pin Orton had no clue
With rage hardy was born anew His eyes now filled with hate Family means everything, Orton should have knew Now the tide has turned, a Twist of Fate
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~Credit to DT "My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber.
Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely."
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« Reply #1 on: January 30, 2008, 07:20:37 pm » |
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Ah. Short Poemz. My favorite type of poetry. XD
I shall be waiting for more.
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« Reply #2 on: January 30, 2008, 07:32:06 pm » |
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I really liked them. Nice job.
Can't wait for more.
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« Reply #3 on: January 30, 2008, 07:43:57 pm » |
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Alright here is some more
Love: In this life of ours there is no such thing as love just a mere lust for another persons touch
Betrayal: How could you do me like that Just stab me in the back When I alone Stood by your side In those hard times in which you Were hated by all?
Waiting: Days fly by with a quickened pace The world is now a great harty race Times are changing without falter A many men rush to the alter But alas I still stand alone Forevere waiting like a stone.
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~Credit to DT "My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber.
Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely."
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« Reply #4 on: January 30, 2008, 07:48:09 pm » |
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I really like Betrayal. Though I can't help but think somebody has inspired you for these poems...
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« Reply #5 on: January 30, 2008, 07:48:45 pm » |
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I really like Betrayal. Though I can't help but think somebody has inspired you for these poems...
A few of them were inspired by said person.......
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~Credit to DT "My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber.
Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely."
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« Reply #6 on: January 31, 2008, 07:34:34 am » |
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I really like the Mom one... amusing.
They are perhaps rather cynical.
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« Reply #7 on: January 31, 2008, 07:38:29 am » |
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Short poetry! My nemesis! XD
Seriously, nice peoms Zach - and yet they seem similar to mine somehow...
Dunno why...
Anyway, keep it up... but don't outshine mine! XPP
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« Reply #8 on: January 31, 2008, 02:25:28 pm » |
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I really like the Mom one... amusing.
They are perhaps rather cynical.
I think so two, on both statements lol Emotion: Ebbing tides wash about me those old emotions now returned That soft touch taints my mind and like a fool I fall again Down the road known as passion.Now for two poems made entirely out of Prepositional Phrases: Through the clouds Bound for action On the ground Beside the battle Against the tide Into war Behind the flames Atop my dragon ============
Out of the ash Among the flames Through new attacks Into their trap Atop my dragon Behind her flames Beside our bretheren Into THEIR war.Touch: In the days before I met you I never knew the simple pleasures of a touch But since that day I have yet to feel as much emotion As our intertwined hands in all that commotion
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~Credit to DT "My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber.
Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely."
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« Reply #9 on: January 31, 2008, 02:31:34 pm » |
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They flow very nicely, good job. ^^
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« Reply #10 on: January 31, 2008, 02:37:04 pm » |
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They flow very nicely, good job. ^^
Thank you, I'm using a sort of traditional rhyme scheme at the moment, it works fairly well in my opinon Most of these are life experiences, Tis like a great poet once said (The name escapes me at the moment and if my english teacher new that she'd freak): "Poetry must be rooted in Human experience"
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~Credit to DT "My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber.
Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely."
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« Reply #11 on: January 31, 2008, 06:25:57 pm » |
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Wow you really have what they call "a way with words" Make more poems! their really great
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« Reply #12 on: January 31, 2008, 06:39:46 pm » |
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Wow very nice LS.
I really like Emotion, Touch, Love and Waiting.
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Xavier, making it rain on dem ho's XD. Credit to CM for the win pic. *XBL Gamertag: xANTiVEN0Mx ... PSN ID: XMEGAVENOMX "Only through struggle, have I found rest, but with a piece of me taken away. Remove from me this deception, that I called love" ~ As I Lay Dying
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« Reply #13 on: January 31, 2008, 07:00:39 pm » |
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All of these, except the Dragon and Sin one, are rooted in my life
Nameless The stars shine brightly in the sky While I stare at your eyes tonight Beautiful pools of blue twinkle back at me As I smile and think how lucky I am That you are finally mine to hold But then my eyes open once more To see that it was all a dream What A fool am I to believe....
Nameless I found myself thinking of her today Funny how my heart still holds on Every little thing has a tie to her Yet I have the blade to cut them in my hand But do I sever the link; No Torture of myself is all that comes to mind As I listen to the song on the radio So now I just lay here with painfull emotions As I try to settle my minds commotion......
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~Credit to DT "My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber.
Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely."
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« Reply #14 on: January 31, 2008, 07:02:26 pm » |
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That was *tear* beautiful!
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