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« Reply #30 on: February 07, 2008, 08:01:24 pm » |
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(Edited for the fact that apparently I'm always wrong)
While they're okay, mine, if I have to say so myself, and I do because no one reads them, mine are better.
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« Reply #31 on: February 07, 2008, 08:31:13 pm » |
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Edited to avoid a war
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« Reply #32 on: February 07, 2008, 08:36:23 pm » |
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Hey You Two, We Have PM For This,
Just Read My Poems And Comment On Them
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~Credit to DT "My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber.
Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely."
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« Reply #33 on: February 07, 2008, 08:48:25 pm » |
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Didn't he tell you, I can't he blocked me.
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« Reply #34 on: February 08, 2008, 03:26:28 am » |
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-shakes head- Jesus Christ, lighten up, the pair of you! Kerachi, Monsieur - this place is for Seph's poetry. It's okay to say you don't like them, but don't flame or spam the topic with a comment war. It isn't fair to others, and he'll have to call the mods to sort out the problem...
Anyway, Watcher seems inspired by a certain manga... although, knowing a lot about it, it may not be... Nice work, again.
((P.S. You ****, Zach! You said you'd comment the next time I stuck up poetry!))
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« Reply #35 on: February 08, 2008, 07:07:52 am » |
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Manga? Heavens no
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Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely."
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« Reply #36 on: February 14, 2008, 04:49:58 pm » |
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Valentines Poetry:
Love Day: Smells of roses float through the air A slight wind ruffling our hair. Today is all about love Which I symbolize with this white dove. To someone of your elegance and grace How is it that I am at your pace? But now there is only one question left for this Valentines And it is, will you be mine?
Curse upon my heart: Couples clinging to one another Happy images of love torture my mind. How is it that these are the people who have that comfort The feeling of happiness and compassionship. It is wasted on them for they throw it away Not knowing how lucky a bond they possess. Yet here I am with an open and loving heart, Being left alone on another lovess Valentine.
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~Credit to DT "My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber.
Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely."
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« Reply #37 on: February 14, 2008, 05:05:10 pm » |
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That was very nice Anon. ^^ I liked it a lot.
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« Reply #38 on: February 14, 2008, 05:13:00 pm » |
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That was very nice Anon. ^^ I liked it a lot.
*bows* No problem, tis my pleasure to have people enjoy my poems
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~Credit to DT "My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber.
Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely."
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« Reply #39 on: February 14, 2008, 05:57:01 pm » |
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Same way I feel about Valentines Day Anon.
Very nice yet again.
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Xavier, making it rain on dem ho's XD. Credit to CM for the win pic. *XBL Gamertag: xANTiVEN0Mx ... PSN ID: XMEGAVENOMX "Only through struggle, have I found rest, but with a piece of me taken away. Remove from me this deception, that I called love" ~ As I Lay Dying
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« Reply #40 on: February 15, 2008, 08:25:12 am » |
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Your poetry shows how mature you actually are. ^^
And it's so sad at the same time *tear*
The 2 poems differ... I mean obviously... as if you have 2 different angles to look at it from. Odd. Which one is the true one?
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« Reply #41 on: February 15, 2008, 01:29:57 pm » |
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Your poetry shows how mature you actually are. ^^
And it's so sad at the same time *tear*
The 2 poems differ... I mean obviously... as if you have 2 different angles to look at it from. Odd. Which one is the true one?
Which do you think? EDIT Unseen: These wounds inside me refuse to heal Inflicted by an enemy who is all too real. I can't escape the torture of my eyes Never able to see past all of their lies. Echoing through my head are the responses of friends Each saying the same placated thing to try and mend. Is there no one out there who wants to be with me To me it seems like that is what it must be... How can one man be so alone in his mind When all around people say that it is only at the time. I'm tired of waiting for my time of love while haunted All I ask for is to be wanted...
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Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely."
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« Reply #42 on: February 15, 2008, 01:49:13 pm » |
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Your poetry shows how mature you actually are. ^^
And it's so sad at the same time *tear*
The 2 poems differ... I mean obviously... as if you have 2 different angles to look at it from. Odd. Which one is the true one?
Which do you think? I know... =( EDIT: New one is sad... me feel sad for you.
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« Reply #43 on: February 15, 2008, 02:08:07 pm » |
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Don't feel sad for me
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Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely."
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« Reply #44 on: February 15, 2008, 02:09:39 pm » |
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Don't feel sad for me
too late ^^ But it will get better, promise. You kept telling me similar and it did.
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