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« on: January 30, 2008, 07:06:29 pm »

Alright since I've been on a creative streak mandated by my english teacher I figured I'd share what I have been writing in class with the internet community, to once again alter the image you have of me,....


Mom:
Flash of lightning through the air
The beat of rain begins to drone
Howling wind through my hair
Help me god, Mom is home


Sins:
Seven Deadly Sins
Await 'round the bend
So I packed a bag and took a trip
To make my life amends


Jeff Hardy XP:
Whisper in the wind
Silence settles through
Now he has the pin
Orton had no clue

With rage hardy was born anew
His eyes now filled with hate
Family means everything, Orton should have knew
Now the tide has turned, a Twist of Fate



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              "My soul, corrupted by vengeance
               Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey
               In my own salvation
               And your eternal slumber.

               Legend shall speak
               Of sacrifice at world's end
               The wind sails over the water's surface
               Quietly, but surely."

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« Reply #1 on: January 30, 2008, 07:20:37 pm »

Ah. Short Poemz. My favorite type of poetry. XD

I shall be waiting for more.
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« Reply #2 on: January 30, 2008, 07:32:06 pm »

I really liked them.
Nice job.

Can't wait for more.
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« Reply #3 on: January 30, 2008, 07:43:57 pm »

Alright here is some more

Love:
In this life of ours
there is no such thing as love
just a mere lust for another persons touch


Betrayal:
How could you do me like that
Just stab me in the back
When I alone Stood by your side
In those hard times in which you
Were hated by all?


Waiting:
Days fly by with a quickened pace
The world is now a great harty race
Times are changing without falter
A many men rush to the alter
But alas I still stand alone
Forevere waiting like a stone.

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              "My soul, corrupted by vengeance
               Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey
               In my own salvation
               And your eternal slumber.

               Legend shall speak
               Of sacrifice at world's end
               The wind sails over the water's surface
               Quietly, but surely."
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« Reply #4 on: January 30, 2008, 07:48:09 pm »

I really like Betrayal. Though I can't help but think somebody has inspired you for these poems...
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« Reply #5 on: January 30, 2008, 07:48:45 pm »

I really like Betrayal. Though I can't help but think somebody has inspired you for these poems...

A few of them were inspired by said person.......
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              "My soul, corrupted by vengeance
               Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey
               In my own salvation
               And your eternal slumber.

               Legend shall speak
               Of sacrifice at world's end
               The wind sails over the water's surface
               Quietly, but surely."
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« Reply #6 on: January 31, 2008, 07:34:34 am »

I really like the Mom one... amusing.

They are perhaps rather cynical.
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« Reply #7 on: January 31, 2008, 07:38:29 am »

Short poetry! My nemesis! XD

Seriously, nice peoms Zach - and yet they seem similar to mine somehow...

Dunno why...

Anyway, keep it up... but don't outshine mine! XPP
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« Reply #8 on: January 31, 2008, 02:25:28 pm »

I really like the Mom one... amusing.

They are perhaps rather cynical.

I think so two, on both statements lol

Emotion:
Ebbing tides wash about me
those old emotions now returned
That soft touch taints my mind
and like a fool I fall again
Down the road known as passion.


Now for two poems made entirely out of Prepositional Phrases:
Through the clouds
Bound for action
On the ground
Beside the battle
Against the tide
Into war
Behind the flames
Atop my dragon
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Out of the ash
Among the flames
Through new attacks
Into their trap
Atop my dragon
Behind her flames
Beside our bretheren
Into THEIR war.


Touch:
In the days before I met you
I never knew the simple pleasures of a touch
But since that day I have yet to feel as much emotion
As our intertwined hands in all that commotion
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               In my own salvation
               And your eternal slumber.

               Legend shall speak
               Of sacrifice at world's end
               The wind sails over the water's surface
               Quietly, but surely."
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« Reply #9 on: January 31, 2008, 02:31:34 pm »

They flow very nicely, good job. ^^
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« Reply #10 on: January 31, 2008, 02:37:04 pm »

They flow very nicely, good job. ^^

Thank you, I'm using a sort of traditional rhyme scheme at the moment, it works fairly well in my opinon


Most of these are life experiences, Tis like a great poet once said (The name escapes me at the moment and if my english teacher new that she'd freak):
"Poetry must be rooted in Human experience"
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              "My soul, corrupted by vengeance
               Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey
               In my own salvation
               And your eternal slumber.

               Legend shall speak
               Of sacrifice at world's end
               The wind sails over the water's surface
               Quietly, but surely."
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« Reply #11 on: January 31, 2008, 06:25:57 pm »

Wow you really have what they call "a way with words"
Make more poems! their really great
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« Reply #12 on: January 31, 2008, 06:39:46 pm »

Wow very nice LS.

I really like Emotion, Touch, Love and Waiting.

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« Reply #13 on: January 31, 2008, 07:00:39 pm »

All of these, except the Dragon and Sin one, are rooted in my life

Nameless
The stars shine brightly in the sky
While I stare at your eyes tonight
Beautiful pools of blue twinkle back at me
As I smile and think how lucky I am
That you are finally mine to hold
But then my eyes open once more
To see that it was all a dream
What A fool am I to believe....


Nameless
I found myself thinking of her today
Funny how my heart still holds on
Every little thing has a tie to her
Yet I have the blade to cut them in my hand
But do I sever the link; No
Torture of myself is all that comes to mind
As I listen to the song on the radio
So now I just lay here with painfull emotions
As I try to settle my minds commotion......
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              "My soul, corrupted by vengeance
               Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey
               In my own salvation
               And your eternal slumber.

               Legend shall speak
               Of sacrifice at world's end
               The wind sails over the water's surface
               Quietly, but surely."
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« Reply #14 on: January 31, 2008, 07:02:26 pm »

That was *tear* beautiful!
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