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« Reply #15 on: January 24, 2008, 04:46:31 pm » |
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ooh, I love them all, nicely done!
I really loved that Guardian one.
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« Reply #16 on: January 24, 2008, 04:48:55 pm » |
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Seraph's Heart is inspired by a lot of people. Not just one or two. It's not easy to judge.
Guardian, on the other hand, is probably inspired solely by you, Ryu. I mean, after all, I generally don't write anything where I look to the light and stay away from the darkness.
I need a lighter tone for the next poem, I do believe...
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« Reply #17 on: January 24, 2008, 06:23:23 pm » |
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I have also read the Guardian now. SHORT POEMZ FTW! xD
It was pretty good (Again. Refusal to say excellent). Though, bonus points for going with something different.
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« Reply #18 on: January 24, 2008, 06:30:03 pm » |
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Hey, that's only because I go with what I know - dark prophecies of hatred generally...
Shaman
Communer with the dead spirits, What I'd like to be. I already have the main aspect covered And that in itself is key.
Controller of their destinies, And able to connect with a certain spirit. Their Guardian Spirit. Mine? Mine is an angel, raven haired With imperious sapphiric eyes. His name is Lucifer, the Light-Bearer. Not fallen, simply my guardian.
I have communed with spirits since I can remember Therefore I deduced I am a shaman. I even see my animal demon - a silverback gorilla.
Shaman trainee technically. With no-one to teach me, I have adapted And taught myself, so much that soon I will no longer consider myself trainee But a fully-fledged shaman.
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« Reply #19 on: January 24, 2008, 06:42:09 pm » |
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You're making me want to write poems.
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"To love someone... It is not to shut one's eyes to the other, nor to block one's ears to the truth... To love one another... Is to walk through life together... Open your eyes, open your ears... Look at each other... and together seek the best path for the both of you." -Endrance, .hack//G.U. Reminisce
*Didn't draw the icon. I don't know who did, but they're amazing and they deserve the credit.
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« Reply #20 on: January 24, 2008, 06:43:04 pm » |
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I make people want to do a lot of stuff, but that's beside the point. XPP
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« Reply #21 on: January 24, 2008, 07:22:33 pm » |
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lol
Anyways..
I really like The Seraph's Heart. It's very nice. I also liked the other two. Very good. I love your poems.
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« Reply #22 on: January 24, 2008, 07:25:03 pm » |
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Seraph's Heart? I didn't necessarily enjoy writing it - more felt I had to voice my opinion on it. Of all the people that's inspired by, I think it's by 'Zella' the most. I want the love I gave to her back in my life soon... My love, not love from her...
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« Reply #23 on: January 24, 2008, 07:33:04 pm » |
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Elemental
((Dedicated to Ryuuto for starting off my massive obsession in roleplaying once more...))
The elemental looks back. Sees simply destruction in their wake. Presses on, not turning back In fear that what they see may cause them to break down and cry. Complete carnage behind them, All the Elemental's fault. Wiping a tear from her eye, She presses forward Hoping to stop her hated foe, Who will be awaiting her arrival Just as clearly as she awaits their final duel. Upon arrival, each harnesses every element And the searing heat and biting winds push back all spectators.
After the smoke clears, one figure walks out, slightly shuddering At the spectacle they made of their opponent. Hand in hand with her friend She makes her journey home. The scene behind her a picture of blistering winds and molten heat With granite-like calm to seal up the hated foe.
This elemental, she has a name. Her name Ryuuto Or Dragon as it is translated. A warrior. A hero. My friend.
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« Reply #24 on: January 24, 2008, 08:07:18 pm » |
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So. I read the Elemental now... Excellent. Completely. Not etraordinary, though, as I still refuse to say it.
And wtf? 3 poemz in an hour?! Wow.
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« Reply #25 on: January 24, 2008, 08:08:32 pm » |
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You can't even count - that's only 2...
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« Reply #26 on: January 24, 2008, 08:17:08 pm » |
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Awesome. Simply awesome. Ryuuto should be honored. lol
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« Reply #27 on: January 24, 2008, 08:20:52 pm » |
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Yes, yes she would. Plus, she's the first person I ever made friends with online as far as I'm aware...
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« Reply #28 on: January 24, 2008, 08:21:38 pm » |
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You can't even count - that's only 2...
-shrugz- I don't really care. I haven't done real math in over a year. Damn geometry. >.> And you still haven't written one about me. I feel so luffed. xD -joke.
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« Reply #29 on: January 24, 2008, 08:23:05 pm » |
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I'm stuck for ideas on you - bear with me...
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