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The Art of The Damned One
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January 22, 2008, 02:38:28 pm »
I've decided to put up my own area in the art forum for every work of art I do. This shall include artwork, poetry and spirting, though different things would be few and far between.
Fallen One
Darkness, is all he dreamt of,
Midnight, his finest hour.
Moonlight, his greatest friend in this
Attempt at claiming all-mighty power.
Vampire, part of his heritage,
Angel, he also be.
Evil - incarnated into flesh,
Fallen One the tile given to he.
Obssessed with his own race,
The hybrid shall be.
Whom is this one I speak about?
Why, of course, the vampire is me!
Unholy child of Morningstar,
And angel whom fell from afar.
Hell-bent on world tyranny,
Abolishing democracy.
Laughing at the plight of humanity,
Always trying to murder me,
the chaotic son, vampiric one,
Lonseraph, why I that one.
My fangs bear a twisted smile,
Evil and extremely vile.
Wings black, as pure as can be,
My price for more power than thee.
God fears my very name
For I cannot go back to whence I came.
Child Of Light, born into Darkness,
Cold, spiteful, evil, heartless.
Resistance is futile, your future looks bleak
For your whole race is incredibly weak.
I have power over all the universe,
And this power serves just one purpose:
The creation of a utopia
For vampires and other creatures of Darkness
For I am the one known simply as Heartless.
This is the poem of Eido Lonseraph,
Watch out for the vampiric wrath.
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Tales Of Lucifer and Perdition
The plains of Perdition are a murky purple,
With waves of opal crashing down upon beaches of pure platinum.
Over these lands or dark beauty rules the Prince Of Darkness,
His Holiness Lucifer, Light-Bearer and Black Seraph.
The pastures of wonderful grasses,
Are tranquil in a blaze of gold.
The Prince, why he rules over this,
Even though his old home doth he miss,
He even finds he's missing Yehovah.
Crowned Satan and ruler of the nether realms,
This is what has happened to Lucifer, Prince Of Darkness.
His light has dimmed,
His sight has thinned,
The powers of his sorceries blind his eyes.
To man he sends the Seven Sins,
Of which he both rules and is subject to.
His pride caused his envy for them,
And his love for Yehovah has been marred by wrathful thoughts.
He now sends his Messiah.
The person of great darkness, born to the race of man,
Just as Jesus Christ was.
The Son of Perdition, herald of the Apocalypse.
This is Lucifer's Messiah.
This man, for he is a man, was born to the race of men in 1992.
As close to the 06/06 as he could be, yet a few days out to refrain from arousing suspicion.
Why, this unholy Messiah spells doom for the race of man.
His dark sorceries are his greatest triumph,
Yet his wish to dominate all is his downfall.
I know all this, for I am he: Lucifer's Messiah.
No Satanist, but Christian.
A spiteful twist in order to antagonize Christos and Yehovah.
My favour of him is fanatical, despite my obvious religious tendencies.
Death to all who oppose him,
Cursed life to those who kneel before him.
An unjust king, yet one who feels destined to rule over all.
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January 22, 2008, 03:48:06 pm »
Okay, I finally read it.
Happy?! XD
Anyways...
In my opinion, they were both really great.
I especially loved the first.
I love the words you chose, and how it all came together.
Very nice.
Can't wait to read any other poems you post, and I also look foward to the artwork, and everything else you've done and will post here.
So, there you go.
You're first comment.
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I claim second! XD
Fallen One=Eido ...How did I see that coming? XD
Lucifer and Perdition=Dark...very dark religious poem. o_o I don't know much about your religion/Christian myth, so...no comment. >_>; ;<_<
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"To love someone... It is not to shut one's eyes to the other, nor to block one's ears to the truth... To love one another... Is to walk through life together... Open your eyes, open your ears... Look at each other... and together seek the best path for the both of you." -Endrance, .hack//G.U. Reminisce
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Yay! Comments! XD
Anyway, I enjoyed writing both of them, particularly the second one. Still, I ought to write shorter ones from time to time - they do take a while to write, and even longer to read, I presume...
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Your poems are awesome, Lucifer. My favourite has to be the one based on Eido, Fallen One. I have to agree with Sonrisa, the words you had chosen were really good.
The second one I found quite confusing with the Christianity (It was Christianity, right?) even though that is my religion. I did understand half of the words though, it was a really good poem which you could sense a great wave of darkness coming from it, then some light, then some darkness. Maybe you didn't but I did XD
I hope to see more of your work, I'm curious about your art >_>
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Meh - I inspire myself. Both of them are about me in a crazy sense of mind.
I intended to send that vibe for poem 2. I actually did. Honest!
The art is going to be up soon. Hopefully...
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Your poetry gave me more emotions than i thought existed!
Make another one soon!
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Messiah
Heart of God,
In man's body,
Cherished son of the Almighty.
He sacrificed himself,
To save us all,
From sin and Lucifer.
Some embrace him,
More acknowledge him,
Some hold him in comtempt.
All we now know,
Is that he is beloved,
By mankind, one and all.
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Sinner
Lust: The emotion of those who want someone
Greed: The emotion of those who need something
Envy: Friend of those who wish to take something
Wrath: The feeling you get when someone offends.
Glutton: When you wish to gorge yourself
Sloth: The desire to nothing.
And then, we rreach the most deadly sin:
Pride, friend of the damned, powerful and proud.
All of these sins Lucifer commited to,
And everyone does he offer to mankind.
It is up to us to resist him,
Though to embrace him and his sins is far easier.
I chose to follow him.
What would you choose?
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Again, great.
The "Sinner" one is my fav out of the two (from the last post).
Very good.
Can't wait to read more, and can't wait untill you post some art.
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Woo! More posts! XD
I enjoyed "Sinner" as well - "Messiah" just came to me first.
Wind Sage
Pale purple hair streaks down
His straight back,
Parting only at the forehead to allow him to see.
His purple eyes, vivid purple eyes,
Suck many things in with their vision.
He is Vaati.
He is the Wind Sage.
His control of wind is uncanny,
Yet evil forces corrupted him.
He became a sinner, beginning again
As a servant of evil, before trying to become a God.
Almost succeeding, he was cut down
By a boy in green, who had three identical friends.
The boy a hero, the Hero of Time.
The sorceror cast down, he repents his sins,
So that he may walk among the race of men
Once again. Vaati - good, turned bad, turned repenter...
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Ooo, loved it.
Again, good word choice, and nice discription.
Also, he's from LoZ, nice.
Very good job.
I'm now becoming a fan of your poems.
I look foward to more.
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Yeah... I really should read all of these shouldn't I? XD
But for now, I've only read The Sinner, as it was shortest and easiest to read. XD
And, so you know. I resist the Sins.
Btw, it wuz pretty good. I refuse to say excellent due to the fact that I don't want you slacking off. >.>
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Quote from: X-Blader Zega on January 23, 2008, 04:35:47 pm
Yeah... I really should read all of these shouldn't I? XD
But for now, I've only read The Sinner, as it was shortest and easiest to read. XD
And, so you know. I resist the Sins.
Btw, it wuz pretty good. I refuse to say excellent due to the fact that I don't want you slacking off. >.>
I don't slack off! But yeah - it was short, yet good.
I should do another one later on...
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The Seraph's Heart
Locked up in chains,
In an astral plain.
The heart of the Seraph is your bane.
His minds of sins,
And many things
Does nothing to compare.
What is love
But a bird on the breeze?
Sometimes a white dove,
Sometimes a black raven
Where does love reside?
In the heart or in the mind?
Why, it doesn't matter for
If you experience love then
You are truly blessed by the Lord.
What is love
But a bird on the breeze?
Sometimes a white dove,
Sometimes a black raven
Set my heart free,
so I may flutter on the winds of love
A free man,
A white dove at times,
A black bird at others.
Please set my love free.
Please.
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Guardian
Fear washes over me,
Dark beast try to kill me,
Who is there to stop them?
All of a sudden,
A piercing light destroys them,
And shatters their chances of survival.
I look up, scorching my eyes,
Looking at the celestital figure.
My angel.
My protector.
My guardian.
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SOMEONE inspired you for those last two (Seraph's Heart and Guardian). Anyway, I like the poems, even though they are a bit dark. xD
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