Ooh. You're the second non-native-English-speaker to tell me that. I really hope that I've improved with practice after that first story, but I'm afraid I might not have. All the same, thanks for showing interest.
(On an unrelated note, Terak and CM took a picture! They look just like I always hoped they would!)
EDIT: "Making My Way" by Dragoness Bahamut is finished. Er . . . actually, it's been finished for months, but I forgot to post it here for anyone interested. Whoops. Incidentally, I believe that the original reason I took a shine to this story in the first place is because the author's name was similar to one "Deathclaw Bahamut."
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OGBaiSyRSk8&list=PLC2yGFjlflZsdnKlVoP1_9WldkAyGGNK7&index=1