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« on: December 30, 2010, 06:08:53 pm »

Nah dude it's pretty awesome, especially the chorus. Could flow a little better in parts but that's about it. Also what genre would it be, cos how good it is depends on how you sing it. I sung it in my head in a sorta rap.

Actually I wrote the whole thing in about 15 mins.. So I know some parts need improvment, I spent the most time on the chrous, glad you noticed that. <3 Thanks a lot.

And actually this one, I was thinking it would be either metal/rock.. or something like linkin park.. a mix.

Now I shall keep my word, and post another one.. On the main post though ^^
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