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Beware. XIII has a stylus and a tablet-laptop.

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« on: October 20, 2009, 10:21:00 pm »

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« Reply #1 on: October 24, 2009, 12:13:00 pm »

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« Reply #2 on: November 25, 2009, 08:05:51 pm »

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« Reply #3 on: December 10, 2009, 07:12:49 am »

All artwork and almost all poetry is now in a link at the first post of this thread.

All my poetry is on there if you want to look at it. I'll probably post any further works of poetry here and not bother with links. As for artwork, I don't think I'll do much more of that. It was fun while it lasted, but I think I'm better with words than I am with images.

Edit: Forgot to mention that feedback, good or bad, is always appreciated! Just try and make it constructive if it's bad.
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« Reply #4 on: December 10, 2009, 01:38:49 pm »

I like the Rewind poem. Definitely feel where you're coming from on that.
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« Reply #5 on: December 10, 2009, 02:55:49 pm »

Apparently that one's really well liked. Or at least the most I've heard people like one poem of mine. I'm glad people like my 13th poem, since I wanted to make it special. I'm really going to have to try with my 13th completely original one, though.
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« Reply #6 on: December 14, 2009, 02:46:05 pm »

"Lie Awake"

As I look at the things
which come from our past.
I both treasure them dearly
and curse their existence.

I hold them dear to my heart.
I couldn't live without them.
But I despise them as well,
for mocking us.

Serving as a constant reminder
that we cannot be together.
Guess I shouldn't blame them.
Either way, I'd be thinking of you.

Lying awake on my bed,
not able to sleep.
Thinking of all that surrounds us.
That which keeps us apart

Knowing if I close my eyes,
I'll have more reminders.
So I figure I'll just go asleep.
Even if it's not real, I can be with you there.
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« Reply #7 on: December 14, 2009, 02:46:54 pm »

"Exist"

Most people don't know (Or don't care.)
of and about the incredible random
chain of events which
put us in existence as we are.

How if the measurements were offset,
even by a minimal amount,
how drastically life would be changed.
I'm glad we exist, though.

If this this chain never happened precisely as it did,
I would've never met my beloved.
Whatever force put us in reality,
I thank you with the utmost gratitude.

As I am thankful to my love,
for being my friend, and being with me.
I am thankful to you for letting
us exist together.

Even if it's just a random chain,
I'll be forever grateful
that I have someone to tell my story to.
That I have someone to know I exist.
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« Reply #8 on: December 14, 2009, 10:07:41 pm »

Dude I really like Lie Awake. Good stuff, keep it coming.
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« Reply #9 on: December 14, 2009, 10:35:43 pm »

Thanks a lot, man. It helps knowing some people like my work.
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« Reply #10 on: December 15, 2009, 02:27:49 pm »

"Clueless"

There's so much to figure out,
but it's so hard to focus now.
She's the lens which brought
my attention on this world.

But now that we can't be
together one-on-one now.
It's made this world hazy again.
It's so confusing to me now.

I look at an everyday problem,
but even with all my focus I can't do anything.
It's eating away at my concentration.
Everything used to make sense...

But now it makes none at all.
No longer can I solve anything.
All my hypothesis, all my work...
All are but old memories,

which no longer make sense.
Everything around me is always changing.
My old theories, now torn asunder.
All that makes sense anymore...is her.
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« Reply #11 on: December 15, 2009, 09:34:30 pm »


Please note that the pronouns such as "she" and "her" which are not capitalized are referring to a different person than the ones to which the capitalized ones are referring.

Not Capitalized - The one whom keeps us apart.
Capitalized - The one whom I love more than anything.

Thank you for reading my work. Have a pleasant day.


"Shifts"

I never thought reality would change.
At least not drastically.
I wanted to make everything perfect,
only I think I did precisely the opposite.

I just wanted to make it perfect
because She deserved it.
Now others have seemed to replace me.
I feel so damned useless.

Now it seems when I try to fix things,
everything is torn more.
I thought it impossible,
like I was really helping.

Maybe I was at first. I don't know.
We had everything planned...
but now...it's all changed.
God help us.

Or God help me, rather.
She seems not ailed.
She would have been...in younger days.
Seems She doesn't hold a grudge like me.

As for me, I can never forgive that...monster.
For putting me through Hell again.
Mind you, I'm still going through it.
Nothing has changed for me, everything for Her.

I don't care if she's changed or not.
she put me through sleepless nights,
plethoras of tears,
pain unlike any other.

Even in my past,
not once have I felt such a pain.
She felt it, too, once.
But I suppose not anymore.

Left alone in my pain...
I don't know how to continue.
I still love Her more than my life itself.
But the people She formed bonds with after my absence...

They're pillars of all I'm against.
Just pretty faces with an empty shell attached.
I know too well what that's like,
to be empty.

It's cruel and never-ending.
I feel my many scars still searing all over.
I'll never be able to forget them.
I don't even know what reality is anymore.

The things she's done to
my already fragmented mind...
are unspeakable and unthinkable.
To be so close to the one I love most...

and lose it all.
She's felt it, too, but She may have forgotten.
Maybe it was too great a pain?
Whatever the case, She has her reasons.

I understand that she had her reasons, too,
but she needn't have used such force.
And now I sit here, broken
having no idea what to do about it.

I don't think she has any idea of
what she's done.
I probably shouldn't be so sensitive,
but she took the love of my life from me.

I developed a bond so quickly,
I guess She didn't.
Or She doesn't care for me anymore.
Who needs something that's broken, right?

I still have every intention
of attempting to be with Her forever.
I just hope to God, if there is one,
that She still loves me like She used to.
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« Reply #12 on: December 17, 2009, 02:24:07 pm »

"Memories"

Reality, that foul thing.
Playing tricks and deceiving people
who don't deserve anything like that.
Dangling what they want in front of their noses.

There's a couple of things it can't take away,
and that's your past.
Your personality.
Your emotion.

It can't take all that makes you up as an individual.
And it can't take away emotional bonds.
It may turn and take the physical ones,
but in no way can it break the emotional.

It may be the master of the physical realm,
but you're always in control of the emotional.
Even when everything seems changed.
As if everyone was against you.

You always control yourself.
It's never too late to change yourself.
And who knows, you might
even change Reality in the process.
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« Reply #13 on: December 20, 2009, 12:44:47 am »

"Opposite"

Beloved...I see us on different sides on an endless pane of glass, separated.
I made this simile once before. Do you remember?
It was when I described us as polar opposites,
when we were discussing how opposites attract.

All of those conversations we had. I'm sure you remember a good handful of them.
All of our conversations and inside jokes were positively delightful.
Even if they were sad, at least I was talking to you about it.
All of this nostalgia bottling up. It's one of the most powerful things I've ever felt.

Yes. Indeed, you are the best thing to ever happen in my life.
And all conversations we had?
I hope they don't end with the last ones we had.
You've brought so much joy and purpose to my previously pointless life, just by being there.

I have never really stopped praising you, have I? I hope you don't find it annoying.
How could I not, though? You've changed my life so radically.
And I one day hope I can do the same for you, like I used to.
Until then, I'll be waiting, watering our flowers.
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« Reply #14 on: December 23, 2009, 02:52:37 am »

"Eternity"

He goes down the street on his motorcycle...
Barely noticed by passersby.
Wrapped, hiding in his jacket.
Fearing everyone he sees is against him. Clinging to the jacket as if it were protection.

Rightfully so, might I add. He wishes to hurry home safely.
However, he cannot go home. He's forced to forever wander
around the world. Around people he doesn't trust.
Around people that don't matter to him.

Fearing everyone he sees, not being able to return
to his only safe haven on this God forsaken planet.
It's a fate few share, and wrongfully so.
Few deserve it, and those who have fallen into it do not deserve it in the least.

He was forced into it by others, to take their place.
Even the one who loves him seems to not want to help him anymore.
He takes the blame of all this Society has wrong with it.
Only one person can save him, but she's what makes it home to him.

He wants to change, but he doesn't know how.
No he trusts wants to help him, or even tell him what to do.
He doesn't know anything that happens anymore.
He's trapped in a moment until he can break out by himself.

Forever fearing the people around him.
Forever worrying about him and all he enjoys.
Forever trying to find a way,
To get back who he loves.
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