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« Reply #15 on: February 11, 2009, 09:21:22 pm »

i dont mind if you change the names, but i would like to know, if you use any of my characters other than Zack, if you would tell me which ones. Just cause itd be nice to know. But otherwise I don't care. =)
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« Reply #16 on: February 14, 2009, 07:16:44 am »

"Woah." That's all I have to say. I doubt I can draw like you do, Z.
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« Reply #17 on: February 19, 2009, 05:11:00 pm »



New page(s) for a new week. :3

Perspective is hard D:
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« Reply #18 on: February 19, 2009, 06:25:27 pm »

OH GOD IT'S MORKEAL

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« Reply #19 on: February 19, 2009, 08:21:33 pm »

Woah...
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« Reply #20 on: February 20, 2009, 05:27:57 pm »

*chuckles at Terak* Sorry, couldn't be helped. XD

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« Reply #21 on: February 20, 2009, 05:52:15 pm »

*chuckles at Terak* Sorry, couldn't be helped. XD
Chuckle all you want. I see that knife behind his back!

On another note, very nice two pages, Zarean. Perspective may be hard, but it doesn't seem to be hurting your drawings' quality any. If anything, it's helping. ^_^
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« Reply #22 on: February 21, 2009, 03:29:30 am »

It does look a little weird, but practice makes perfect, right?
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« Reply #23 on: February 21, 2009, 01:12:39 pm »

No disrespect, but I'm going to balance out all the praise with a spoonful of criticism. :3

The frequent errors in capitalization, punctuation and spelling make the comic a tad difficult to read. You might wanna have someone proofread your comics before you post them. You'll have no trouble finding a volunteer for that here, I assure you. :P

Comic Sans is widely felt (I assume) by comic artists to be cheap, unprofessional and just plain unattractive. I've taken the liberty of finding one two three fonts that might do the job a little better.

In the future, you should probably make your trees a little taller, 'cause the ones on page 5 make Zarean look like a giant. c:

I've always been partial to black rims on comic clouds, but I'm hesitant to recommend them 'cause I don't know if it's just bias talking. Just, y'know, think about it a bit.

Why is the first page so much bigger than the rest? o    ___o

That said, I'm enjoying the comic so far and the art is pretty bitchin'. You'd nailed, like, every facial expression, so major kudos there.


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« Reply #24 on: February 22, 2009, 06:33:25 am »



Newww page... It's Sparkly! :3

Onto the comments:

OH GOD IT'S MORKEAL

> > Morkeal? Who's Morkeal? I know no one by that name. < <

It does look a little weird, but practice makes perfect, right?

Yes, after all that's what this is for me, a Learning experience. Pushing myself in ways I never had before now. Lots of practice and firsts involved.

No disrespect, but I'm going to balance out all the praise with a spoonful of criticism. :3

Nooone Taken, Criticism is an Artists stable.
Thanks for all of the suggestions and I'll try and pay more attention to any Grammatical and Spelling errors that might pop up, but if anyone wants to help feel free to point them out and I'll go back and fix 'em. Now,
I've tried before but can't seem to download any new fonts into my Photoshop program, but I did go looking around at what I do have available, and I picked something different for Zarean's Dialog. Trying it out in this new page, hopefully it looks better.
I'll keep that in mind about the Tree's, XD That was my bad, I remember my school always having Midgit tree's lining the outside walkways.
I had tried the black Rims at the begining, but found I didn't like them as much, so I dropped them and used the solid white ones.
First page is actually 2 pages in one, so that's why its so much bigger.

And thank you :3 I'm enjoying drawing all the facial expressions, they're alot of fun.



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Another new page.
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« Reply #26 on: March 01, 2009, 04:58:12 pm »

The plot frickin' thickens. o_o

I love that first panel. XD
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« Reply #27 on: March 04, 2009, 12:51:27 pm »



A girl can dream, right? D:
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« Reply #28 on: March 04, 2009, 02:19:44 pm »



Another new page.

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« Reply #29 on: March 04, 2009, 08:42:26 pm »

Technically it should be math geniuses.
You don't capitalize mathematics or math either.
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