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« on: December 01, 2008, 09:42:37 pm »

Most of my poems will not be happy because I'm not a typicaly happy person when I write them. But I'm going to share these bits and peices of myself with you through my writing. Let's see how long it'll last.

Rocks and Butterflies

You lay here
seeming most dead
You cry here
screaming for end
You sit here
watching your world die
while rocks are crushing
butterflies


Inspiration- A dream I had last night; I may continue this one... I like it.


I Am

I Am A Dreamer
Minds Are Great Things
I Am A Survivor
Taking What Life Brings
I Am A Fighter
Held Back By These Strings
I Am A Lover
With A Heart That Stings


Inspiration- My life; 1st real poem I wrote

Untitled #1

I won't smile a smile, If it's not true
You can sit for a while, While the sky's still blue
But I will cry today, Despite what you might say

I tend to scream at night, Violently waking
If you would hold me tight, It might stop the shaking
Will you lie beside me please, For my pain you just may ease

Stop lying to me, why is it the truth you keep?
Why can't you see, Your lies have cut me deep
Things have been left unsaid. God, This is what I dread.


Inspiration- my depression and pain caused by someone I once loved


Cry
When you break down and cry on my shoulder.
Don't cry for yourself, because you are older.
Cry for those who are sad and alone and in repose.


Inspiration- Myself and things I should have done.
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« Reply #1 on: December 01, 2008, 10:04:18 pm »

I like the first one too. In response to the second one: Survivor*, these*.
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« Reply #2 on: December 02, 2008, 11:49:09 am »

I like the 1st three, Cry, doesn't really fit your previous style. As for Untitled #1, May suggest a Name or a Title?
If so, You should call it "Lost" Or "Forgotten" i think they fit well. And would really add to the message, really deep.
Keep it up. ^^

Although, don't stay Depressed too long, Life is too short to dwell in the past, or on past mistakes or regrets.
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« Reply #3 on: December 02, 2008, 04:43:00 pm »

Thank you for the comments. I didn't catch my spelling mistakes earlier, and I like the title suggestions... I'm gonna have to sit on those for a while though.
Life is too short to do that. OMG. Inspiration.
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« Reply #4 on: December 02, 2008, 06:54:04 pm »

O.o Inspiration for what another poem?
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« Reply #5 on: December 03, 2008, 04:55:52 pm »

Hellz to the yeah. Let's see if my brain is capable ofmaking anything out of it.
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« Reply #6 on: December 03, 2008, 09:30:00 pm »

-Waits patiently for the gears of perfection to spill out another song fit for gods-
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