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« on: December 01, 2008, 09:42:37 pm » |
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Most of my poems will not be happy because I'm not a typicaly happy person when I write them. But I'm going to share these bits and peices of myself with you through my writing. Let's see how long it'll last.
Rocks and Butterflies
You lay here seeming most dead You cry here screaming for end You sit here watching your world die while rocks are crushing butterflies
Inspiration- A dream I had last night; I may continue this one... I like it.
I Am
I Am A Dreamer Minds Are Great Things I Am A Survivor Taking What Life Brings I Am A Fighter Held Back By These Strings I Am A Lover With A Heart That Stings
Inspiration- My life; 1st real poem I wrote
Untitled #1
I won't smile a smile, If it's not true You can sit for a while, While the sky's still blue But I will cry today, Despite what you might say
I tend to scream at night, Violently waking If you would hold me tight, It might stop the shaking Will you lie beside me please, For my pain you just may ease
Stop lying to me, why is it the truth you keep? Why can't you see, Your lies have cut me deep Things have been left unsaid. God, This is what I dread.
Inspiration- my depression and pain caused by someone I once loved
Cry When you break down and cry on my shoulder. Don't cry for yourself, because you are older. Cry for those who are sad and alone and in repose.
Inspiration- Myself and things I should have done.
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I dont need a reset button, if I fail once thats it, I don't need to do it again. "When I was your age, Pluto was a planet, and there were only 150 pokemon." I have a curse for you all.... may all your bacon burn. =P
I Nature_Dragon_Vivi here by claim the following characters: Zelda And her alter ego Sheik, Midna, Samus, Ike, Marth, Yoshi, Kalas (Baten Kaitos), All Characters from TALES OF SYMPHONNIA and SKIES OF ARCADIA. Of course I must state that I am indeed unclaimable.
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« Reply #1 on: December 01, 2008, 10:04:18 pm » |
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I like the first one too. In response to the second one: Survivor*, these*.
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« Reply #2 on: December 02, 2008, 11:49:09 am » |
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I like the 1st three, Cry, doesn't really fit your previous style. As for Untitled #1, May suggest a Name or a Title? If so, You should call it "Lost" Or "Forgotten" i think they fit well. And would really add to the message, really deep. Keep it up. ^^
Although, don't stay Depressed too long, Life is too short to dwell in the past, or on past mistakes or regrets.
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Time is a great teacher, but unfortunately it kills all its pupils I KILLED Death and stole his scythe. Yes, it IS as bad-ass as it sounds.
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« Reply #3 on: December 02, 2008, 04:43:00 pm » |
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Thank you for the comments. I didn't catch my spelling mistakes earlier, and I like the title suggestions... I'm gonna have to sit on those for a while though. Life is too short to do that. OMG. Inspiration.
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I dont need a reset button, if I fail once thats it, I don't need to do it again. "When I was your age, Pluto was a planet, and there were only 150 pokemon." I have a curse for you all.... may all your bacon burn. =P
I Nature_Dragon_Vivi here by claim the following characters: Zelda And her alter ego Sheik, Midna, Samus, Ike, Marth, Yoshi, Kalas (Baten Kaitos), All Characters from TALES OF SYMPHONNIA and SKIES OF ARCADIA. Of course I must state that I am indeed unclaimable.
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« Reply #4 on: December 02, 2008, 06:54:04 pm » |
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O.o Inspiration for what another poem?
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Time is a great teacher, but unfortunately it kills all its pupils I KILLED Death and stole his scythe. Yes, it IS as bad-ass as it sounds.
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« Reply #5 on: December 03, 2008, 04:55:52 pm » |
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Hellz to the yeah. Let's see if my brain is capable ofmaking anything out of it.
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I dont need a reset button, if I fail once thats it, I don't need to do it again. "When I was your age, Pluto was a planet, and there were only 150 pokemon." I have a curse for you all.... may all your bacon burn. =P
I Nature_Dragon_Vivi here by claim the following characters: Zelda And her alter ego Sheik, Midna, Samus, Ike, Marth, Yoshi, Kalas (Baten Kaitos), All Characters from TALES OF SYMPHONNIA and SKIES OF ARCADIA. Of course I must state that I am indeed unclaimable.
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« Reply #6 on: December 03, 2008, 09:30:00 pm » |
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-Waits patiently for the gears of perfection to spill out another song fit for gods-
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Time is a great teacher, but unfortunately it kills all its pupils I KILLED Death and stole his scythe. Yes, it IS as bad-ass as it sounds.
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