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« on: November 17, 2007, 04:33:04 pm »

NOTE-My fan-fic is a sort of alertna-world.So I have used actual scenes from the show.
No copyright infringement intended.
I started this fan-fic months ago in PCF and it was blog-exclusive.I finally decided to post it forum-wise.
I have 12 chapters already done that go along the course of the series.This is far from done ^__^;;
Oh and I've fixed some things that were screwy with it format-wise.
I'm going to be posting the chapters slowly for 2 reasons.
1-So people can catch up.
2-Because I need to fix some kinks with the chapters...
Please enjoy!




The Lone Earthbender

Chapter 1



Walking through the snowy lands of the South Pole on a winter's morning,Xemone sat down to rest.
It's too cold here.How could anyone live in such a place?
Xemone then took some sand from her giant sand gourd(Yes I did take that idea from Gaara.It's a cool gourd and I needed her to have some sort of means of earthbending there.) and wrapped it around her.The sun beating down heated up the sand slowly,she used earthbending to make the sand suck up more heat.
Well that's a bit better...I'm almost there....I can feel it...
Xemone sucked the sand back into the sand gourd and continued to walk....
I wonder why the energy signal is so faint...For something so powerful to emit a signal this weak...strange.
As soon as she thought that,a huge beam of light shot into the sky from a few miles away.
That's interesting...
Xemone then ran towards the light,stopping in her tracks when she spotted a fire nation ship not too far away.
Oh man,they better not get there before I do.
Xemone then took sand from her gourd and poured two foot sized spots on the snow.She stepped on them and earthbended them to shoot her as fast as she could go.
About 20 minutes later Xemone stopped.She was in front of open water.
Great that's just what I needed.Freezing cold open water when I can't swim...
Xemone then used the sand beneath her feet to lift her up and fly her over the water.
The signal is gone...Every trace of it...I don't understand.
Xemone spotted something.She landed on an iceberg and looked at a huge bison paw-print.
"Hmm..." Said Xemone."Flying...Bison..." Xemone then spotted the fire nation ship again.
If they want the Avatar so badly then....they can save me the trouble of finding him...
Xemone followed the ship while staying out of sight....

*A couple hours later*

Xemone and the ship both stopped at a small water tribe village.
Xemone watched,waiting for the Avatar to appear.A fire nation prince with a large burn scar on his face came out of the ship along with a band of fire nation soldiers.A teenage boy from the water tribe tried to attack head-on with a club but got kicked away by the scar-faced firebender.
....Idiot...,thought Xemone.
The firebender than looked at the gathered tribe and said "Where are you hiding him?"
The tribe was silent.
The firebender got impatient and grabbed an old woman from the tribe."He'd be about this age!Master of all elements?!"
The tribe was still silent.He threw the lady back into the crowd.Tired of the water tribes insolence he shot fire over the water tribes heads.He then said "I know you're hiding him!"
The water tribe teen then grabbed the club and charged at the firebender,but he flipped him with ease and sent a fire blast at him.The water tribe teen then threw a boomerang at him but he dodged it.
A small child then threw a spear to the teen and he attacked the firebender.He broke the spear,smacked him in the head with the handle and broke it in two.Just then the boomerang returned and smacked the firebender in the back of the head.
Xemone thought ...they're both idiots...
The firebender than made two daggers out of fire and prepared for battle.Just then a bald boy covered in arrow tattoos with a staff slid down a snowy hill on the back of a penguin and crashed right into the back of the firebender sending him flying.The firebender signaled his soldiers to surround the boy,but he airbended the snow to shoot right at the soldiers and the scar-faced firebender.
The boy said "Looking for me?" the firebender replied "You're the airbender?...You're the Avatar?!"
Xemone stared and thought But that's impossible.He's only a child.The Avatar should be at least 100,but this kid looks like he's 12.There's no mistaking that he's an airbender though.Is it possible that maybe there was one survivor of the air temples and these water tribe people took him in?
The firebender and the young airbender took fighting postions.Not surprisingly the firebender started with multiple fire blasts with the airbender simply defending.
Xemone thought Well he seems to have some skills....
The airbender saw how scared the tribe was and surrendered to the firebender.
Xemone thought Maybe it wasn't such a good idea to just follow them.I thought the Avatar would just blow them away if they angered him enough and he just surrenders... but then again I never thought he'd be a child,either...I'm still not totally convinced he's the Avatar though....I'll have to sneak the boy away from these firebenders.Xemone then snuck on board the ship.

While in a small hiding place on the ship,a short while later,Xemone overheard "He's escaped!The Avatar's escaped!"
Xemone then ran out thinking Can't these idiots do anything right?
Xemone spotted the child,but hid again.Well he may have wiggled away from the guards but he's on a ship in the middle of a freezing cold ocean.Granted he could probably use his powers to fly away but where would he go?and how far could he run?
The scarred firbender emerged and chased after him as the airbender tried to fly away.
Xemone thought If I don't get proof that he's the avatar in the next 5 minutes I'll make him show his true face...
A flying bison then appeared overhead with the same water tribe teen that attacked before and a teenage water tribe girl.
Xemone thought Oh gimme a break.A rescue mission?Looks like I AM going to have to step in.
The firebender continued to attack the child eventually knocking him over the edge into the water.A few seconds later Xemone sensed the power again and a huge whirlpool with the child on top,eyes and airbender tattoos glowing .
Xemone thought There's no mistaking it....He IS the Avatar....and he IS......my enemy....
The Avatar then waterbended the water to knock the firebenders away in one swoop and afterwards he collapsed,seemingly exausted from the usuage of his Avatar powers.
Xemone had the perfect opportunity to snatch him,but his friends landed with the bison to help him.
Xemone thought I suppose it doesn't matter.He's is of no use to me in this state anyway.I'll just have to keep and eye on him.
The firebender then reappeared from the side of the ship but the male water tribe teen knocked him off with the airbenders staff.
The girl was about to be attacked by the soldiers and tried to freeze them,accidently freezing her brothers feet.Then she concentrated and froze the soldiers.
They all got on the bison and flew away,but as the took off the supposed uncle of the scarred firebender helped him back up onto the ship and they both shot fireballs at the bison,but the Avatar airbended the fireballs,intercepting them into the face of a huge iceberg.
Sending an avalanche over the ship.Xemone thought ....ugh... as a huge avalanche of snow covered her.
She emerged a few minutes later from the snow only to see boots in front of her.She looked up and saw the scarred firebender in front of her.
"What are you doing on MY ship?!"
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« Reply #1 on: November 17, 2007, 05:16:33 pm »

NOTE-My fan-fic is a sort of alterna-world.So I have used actual scenes from the show.
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The Lone Earthbender


Chapter 2


Xemone got up out of the snow and responded to the scarred firebender saying in a monotone voice "Observing the Avatar...."
The firebender replied "For what purpose?!Who are you?!"
"You yell a lot...I'm called 'Xemone' and my reasons for observing the Avatar are none of your concern."
"It IS my concern since you're stowing away on MY ship!!"
"I'm going to leave the instant you hit shore anyway.I'm not going to waste energy bending that far.You won't notice I'm here"
"THAT IS NOT THE POINT!Which nation are you from?!"
"I was born in the earth kingdom but I'm a rogue.I was banished from the earth kingdom...I'm not sided with any nation if that's what you think."
"Uncle,I think we have a spy on my ship"
The older firebender responded saying "If she is a spy why would she let us catch her?Let alone why would she introduce herself?"
The younger firebender said "Spies are clever con artists when they're caught.Besides if you're not a spy then what are you doing here!?"
"Calm down...I already said why.I was observing the Avatar.That battle was pathetic by the way..."
"THAT'S ENOUGH!Take her to the brig!"
As soon as the soldiers tried to apprehend her Xemone sandbended a ring of sand around her and expanded it to knock the soldiers away.
"I said I wouldn't cause trouble,but if you insist on making trouble for me I have no second thoughts against blowing all these excuses for benders off the ship and driving myself"
The young firebender paused then said angrily "Fine!You can stay!But only until we hit land and only if you stay out of my way!
"...Fine then,....What is your name anyway?"
"Not that I should bother telling YOU but I am Prince Zuko of the fire nation"
Zuko's uncle responded cheerfully "And I'm his amazing Uncle Iroh.Pleasure to meet you Xemone"
"...Hmph....'Prince'..."
Xemone then walked to the bow of the ship and leaned against the guard rails.
"Hmph...Whatever...We must make repairs to the ship anyway.Set sail for land."
Zuko then walked to his quarters and they sailed to land.

Still leaning on the bow,Xemone noticed they hit land.
Zuko shouted "Earthbender!We've hit land so get off my ship!"
Zuko was in a hurry so he got off first with Uncle Iroh and Xemone followed.
Zuko noticed her behind them and said "Why are you following us?!"
"Because you can provide me with valuable information on the Avatar and you can provide me with transportation so I won't waste valuable energy"
"YOU SAID YOU'D ONLY RIDE UNTIL WE HIT LAND!"
"I DID ride until we hit land....then I got off and followed you....then I'm gonna get BACK on the ship..."
"THAT IS NOT WHAT WE AGREED!
"Yes,we agreed that I could stay on the boat until we hit land and as long as I stay out of your way....well we're on land...and I'm behind you so..."
Zuko had a baffled look on his face followed by Iroh saying "You know she has a point.You did say she could stay until we hit land and as long as she stayed out of your way"
Zuko started getting extremely angry and shouted "FINE!!I DON'T CARE ANYMORE!" and walked off with Iroh and Xemone following.
"Uncle I want the repairs done as soon as possible.I don't want to risk staying too long and losing his trail"
Iroh replied "You mean the Avatar."
Zuko whisper-shouted "Don't say his name on these docks.Once word gets out that he's alive every firebender in the world will be after him and I don't want anyone getting in the way."
A mans voice then said "Getting in the way of what,Prince Zuko?"
An older firebender with odd sideburns then walked up to Zuko,Iroh and Xemone.
Zuko said "Captain Zhao..."
"It's 'Commander' now.General Iroh,great hero of our nation."
"RETIRED general"
Zhao then looked behind them and said "Is...that an earthbender?"
Zuko paniked and said "Uhhh...Yes.We picked her up along our last trip....She's our mehchanic.She's very poor so she begged for a job with us and we took pity upon her."
Xemone snarled.
Zhao was suspicious but brushed it off and said "Taking in homeless earthbender teens as your crew now Zuko?...I believe you're the one who needs pity..."
Zuko got a bit angry,but kept his anger underwraps.
Zhao then said "The Fire Lords brother and son are welcome guests anytime.What brings you to my harbor?"
Iroh said "Our ship is being repaired"
Zhao turned his attention to the terribly damaged ship,covered in ice.
"That's quite a bit of damage" said Zhao with a suspicious tone.
Zuko then got nervous and said "Yes you wouldn't believe what happened....UNCLE...tell Commander Zhao what happened."
"Uh...yes I will do that..It was incredible...what did we crash or something?"
Zuko got more nervous and said "Yes...right into an earth kingdom ship."
Zhao replied with the same suspicious tone "Really?You must regail me with all the thrilling details....Join me for a drink?"
"Sorry but we have to go..." said Zuko.
"Zuko!...Show commander Zhao your respect.We would be honored to join you.Do you have any ginseng tea?It's my favorite." replied Iroh cheerfully.
Zuko got frustrated and blew fire in anger and started to walk off with Xemone behind him and then he stopped.
"No you can't come!
Stay beside the ship,put your giant sand jar thing inside the ship so you won't be as noticable and DO NOT MOVE!We will be back later.and don't talk to ANYONE!"
Zuko then walked off and Xemone huffed and thought Geez,Princey thinks he rules the world.Bossing me around like he owns me.
Xemone was about the enter the ships corridors when she thought It's going to be very boring just waiting for them...
She then sandbended some sand from her gourd under her feet and placed the gourd inside a closet and said "I think I'll see what the Fire nation is really like" and flew off on top of the sand.

Meanwhile,at Commander Zhaos headquarters

"...And by years end the earth kingdom capitol will be under our rule.The Fire Lord will finally claim victory in this war."
"If my father thinks the rest of the world will follow him willingly then he is a fool" Said Zuko.
"2 Years at sea have done little to temper your tongue.So,How's your search for the Avatar going?" Said Zhao with an attitude.
Iroh then knocked over a few spears that were hanging off the wall and said "My fault entirely!" and backed away.
Zuko said "We haven't found him yet."
"Did you really expect to?"Replied Zhao."The Avatar died 100 years ago.Along with the rest of the airbenders.Unless you've found some evidence that the Avatar is alive.."
"No...Nothing"
"Prince Zuko,the Avatar is the only one who can stop the fire nation from winning this war,If you have an ounce of loyalty left,you'll tell me what you've found."
"I haven't found anything.It's like you said,the Avatar probably died a long time ago."
Zuko got up from his chair and said "Come on Uncle.We're going."
Zuko was stopped by Zhaos guards as they crossed their spears in front of him.
Zhaos guard then said "Commander Zhao,we interrogated the crew as you instructed.They confirmed Prince Zuko had the Avatar in custody,but let him escape."
"Now remind me...how exactly was your ship damaged?"

Xemone kept sneaking around and thought This place is boring and sneaking around is no fun...Hmph...Might as well see what the Prince and his Uncle are doing.
Xemone then went off in the direction Zuko and Iroh went.

"So a 12 year old boy bested you and your firebenders?You're more pathetic then I thought." Said Zhao
"I underestamated him once but it will not happen again." Replied Zuko.
"No it will not,because you won't have a second chance."
"Commander Zhao!I've been hunting the Avatar for 2 years and I--"
Zuko was interrupted by Zhao firebending and shouting "AND YOU FAILED!Capturing the Avatar is too important to leave in a teenagers hands.He's mine now."
Zuko became agitated and tried to attack Zhao,only to be stopped by Zhaos guards.
"Keep them here"
As Zhao left Zuko kicked over the table Iroh was drinking tea off of.
Iroh said "More tea please!"

Xemone the arrived at the tent Zuko and Iroh were in but still kept out of sight due to not wanting to cause trouble.
Instead she earthbended herself underground and peeked her eyes under the floor.
Hmm...someones coming.


"My search party is ready.Once I'm out to sea my guards will escort you back to your ship and you'll be free to go."
Zuko replied with a suspicious tone "Why?Are you worried I'm going to try and stop you?"
Zhao laughed and said "You?Stop me?Impossible."
"Don't underestimate me Zhao!I will capture the Avatar before you!"
Iroh intervened and said "Prince Zuko,that's enough!"
"You can't compete with me.I have hundreds of warships under my command and you...You're just a banished prince.No home.No allies.Your own father doesn't even want you."
Xemone thought Well now....doesn't that all sound familiar?....
Zuko replied to Zhao "You're wrong!Once I deliver the Avatar to my father he will welcome me home with honor!And restore my rightful place on the throne!"
"If you're father really wanted you home,he would've let you return by now.Avatar or no Avatar,but in his eyes you are a failure and a disgrace to the fire nation."
"That's not true!"
"You have the scar to prove it."
Zuko jumped forward and yelled "MAYBE YOU'D LIKE ONE TO MATCH!"
"Is that a challenge?"
"YES!An Agni kai.At sunset"
"Very well.It's a shame your father won't be here to watch me humiliate you.I guess your uncle will do."and with that Zhao walked off.
Iroh said "Prince Zuko,have you forgotten the last time you dueled a master?"
"I will never forget..."
Xemone then earthbended out and thought Well...I certainly can't miss this....besides this will help me learn of firebender fighting techniques...
She then earthbended underground again and headed for the battle arena.

*At sunset*

Xemone climbed on top of the walls of the arena and hid herself behind a torch to watch the battle between the Prince and the Commander.
"Remember your firebending basics,Prince Zuko.They are your greatest weapons." said Iroh as he readied Zuko for the duel.
"I refuse to let him win." Replied Zuko
"This will be over quickly" said Zhao smugly.
Xemone took note of the battle stances and prepared to study the fight.
Zuko and Zhao started the duel.
Zuko attacked full on first with an all-out assault and Zhao easily defending but Zuko wouldn't give up.He fire-kicked towards Zhao but he just kept defending.Zhao finally attacked and pushed Zuko back with huge fire blasts,With one huge blast Zuko was down.
Zhao then jumped up in front of the fallen Prince and prepared a final attack.
Xemone watched and thought Over already?
Zhao then launched his attack but then Zuko lifted himself up and spin-kicked the attack away,while at the same time,tripping the Commander.
With Zuko in command now he kicked up numerous fire attacks at Zhao who was now sloppily trying to defend.
Xemone smirked and said quietly "Well...looks like the Prince CAN hold his own..."
Zuko then kicked Zhao down and prepared a final attack of his own.
Zhao shouted "DO IT!"
Zuko shot the fire blast but aimed it to hit right by Zhao's face.So's to scare him but not kill him.
Xemone saw this and said "Hmm..."
"That's it?Your father raised a coward."
"Next time you get in my way I promise....I won't hold back"
Zuko then turned his back and walked away.
Zhao quietly got up and attacked while Zuko had his back turned but the attack was negated by Iroh who grabbed Zhaos foot and threw him back.Zuko then tried to attack Zhao again but was also stopped my Iroh.
"No Prince Zuko.Do not taint your victory.So this is how the great Commander Zhao acts in defeat?...Disgraceful...even in exile my nephew is more honorable than you.Thanks again for the tea...It was delicious..." Said Iroh.Iroh and Zuko then walked out of the battle arena.
Xemone stood beside the torch with an inquisitive look on her face but then realized she had to get back to the ship and earthbended underground and quickly tunneled back.

*A little while later*

Zuko and Iroh returned to the ship.
Zuko then spotted Xemone and said "Oh yeah.You,I forgot you were still here."
"You were sure gone for a long time..." Said Xemone as she acted like she had never left the ship.
"I presume you didn't cause me any trouble while we were away...I've been meaning to ask...what do you want with the Avatar?"
"My reasons for following the Avatar are none of your concern,Prince.If the time ever arises when you need to know I'll tell you,but for now let's just leave it as....the Avatar is my enemy..."
"....Hmm...Fair enough I suppose.I don't care either way as long as you don't try to take him before me."
Xemone then walked to the bow again and leaned against the guard rails.
"I'm fine sleeping on the bow in the open so no need to do anything for me."
"Good because I wasn't planning to." snapped Zuko.
"...but be warned that if I wake up in a jail cell that the damage I'll do to this ship will make what the Avatar did pale in comparison...."
Zuko huffed at her "threat".
Xemone then grabbed her gourd from the closet and wrapped herself in the sand on the bow.She then laid down and tried to fall asleep.
Zuko and Iroh went to their seperate chambers and the ship set sail.....
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The Lone Earthbender
Chapter 3



*The next morning*

Zuko woke up and got dressed in a hurry,knowing that no time could be spared if Zhao was after the Avatar as well now.He then walked onto the bow to see a sleeping Xemone.Zuko got angry and yelled "EARTHBENDER!! WAKE UP!!!" Xemone half-opened her left eye and,being a person who only despises one thing more than mornings and that's being forcibly woken up,took some of the sand that was wrapped around her to keep her warm,grabbed Zukos feet and knocked him over.She then fell back asleep.Zuko got up and was furious now. "You're gonna pay for that earthbender!WAKKKKKKKKKKEEEEEEEEE UPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!" Xemone then fully opened her left eye and shot some of the sand straight toward him knocking him into the wheelhouse.Xemone then went back to sleep.
Zuko then looked out the window of the wheel and said "I've had it..." he then shot a fireball toward the rail of the ship and it exploded in front of Xemone. Xemone woke up in surprise."Well now.Wake up lazy earthbender..." and walked down to the deck again.When Zuko came down to the bow again Xemone said angrily yet as monotone as ever "What....was that for?"
Zuko replied "If you had just woken up when I said I wouldn't of had to torch you awake so it's your fault."
"Irritant...Where are we going?...."
"We have knowledge that the Avatar is headed to Kyoshi Island and Zhao has no idea so we're headed there before he finds out."
"....Kyoshi huh?...Wonder why he'd go there..."
"It doesn't matter as long as we know where he's going."
Iroh then came out and said "Hello,Young Xemone! Greetings Nephew!"
Zuko and Xemone both went "ugh..."
"Would either of you like some tea?I just made it"
Zuko said "Tea?...It's barely sunrise and you're drinking tea?"
"There's no time in existence that isn't tea time Zuko.Oh well,I see neither of you want any.If you need me I'll be in my quarters."
Xemone thought for a second then said "Iroh..."
"What about him?..."
"Is...is he the same General Iroh who attacked Ba Sing Se two years ago?"
"Yeah,but he doesn't like to talk about it...Why?"
"Just wondering.I don't really care..."
Xemone then walked inside the ship to wash up.
Zuko then said to himself "What am I thinking?She can't be trusted to be alone inside the ship.Who knows what she could be stealing or messing with?"
Zuko then ran into the ship to find her.He then opened the door to a small enpty room to find Xemone in her underwear and Zuko noticed a very long intricate tattoo on her back.Like a ancient seal at the back of her neck connected to what looked like interlocking diamondshape-chains running down her back branching off onto her limbs.The diamond chain-like tattoos end at the limbs by wrapping her ankles and wrists in almost shackle like forms and noticing a similar chain-like collar tattoo around her neck.Along with the tattoo Xemone was covered head to toe in deep gashing scars.
Xemone turned around and glared at Zuko who was in surprise and shock at the number of massive scars on her.She then knocked him away with her sand and said unscathed "Apparently firebenders don't knock..." then she shut the door again.

Once Zuko regained consciousness he got up and said to himself "Well...I'm knocking on every door from now on..." and went to the wheelhouse to ask how far until they got to Kyoshi.
"How much longer until we get there?" asked Zuko.
"Not much longer." answered the helmsman.
"Good"
Zuko then saw Xemone on the bow and decided to go down and ask her something.
"Earthbender."
"He sees me half naked and still can't say my name...Yes,your majesty?"
"How'd you get that ugly tattoo on your back? and what's with all the scars?"
"....Unlike being cushy-banished where you get your own army and ship and get waited on hand and foot,I was left to defend myself against everyone and everything by myself.You get hurt here and there ya know scarface?"
"Hmph....What about that tattoo?pretending you're some form of airbender?"
"....Those marks....are my shackles....Cursed marks....nothing more...."
"Your shackles?"
"We're here."
"Huh?...Oh.Kyoshi Island.He won't get away this time."
"I'll stay here.Chances are you won't catch him here anyway..."
Zuko snapped and said "Shut up!What makes you say I won't!?"
"The fact you couldn't contain him last time,you're a second rate firebender and I know something about this island that you don't"
"Oh forget it.If you wanna stay here then fine,but when I bring the Avatar aboard you have to leave for good!"
"You're gonna get your butt kicked..."
"Be quiet!"
Zuko then went off the ship.
"COME OUT AVATAR! YOU CAN'T HIDE FROM ME FOREVER!! There was nothing but silence.Zuko then commanded towards his soldiers "FIND HIM!!"
Zukos soldiers then panned out and searched for the Avatar.
Just then a bunch of female warriors dressed in clothes reminicent of that of Avatar Kyoshi attacked them from out of nowhere.Someone who seemed to be the leader attacked Zuko head on.
Xemone then said while watching "The Kyoshi warriors.....That dumb prince will never learn anything..."
Zuko then knocked the leader away and tried to send a final blow at her but was blocked by Sokka,who was dressed in Kyoshi warrior clothing.Another Kyoshi warrior fell from the sky and knocked Zuko down and was then surrounded by Kyoshi warriors.He then used a fire spin kick move to knock them all away.
"NICE TRY AVATAR!BUT THESE LITTLE GIRLS CAN'T SAVE YOU!" Declared Zuko.
Xemone then said "Huh...guess he's better than I first thought.Taking out two Kyoshi warriors and a she-male..."
A voice then yelled "Hey!" as the Avatar appeared...
Zuko said "Finally..." and attacked the young airbender.
Aang dodged and defended then used two Kyoshi warrior fighting fans and blew Zuko smack into a building.He then grabbed his glider and flew off.
Xemone said "I told him....but he wouldn't listen..."

A little while later Zuko spotted the Avatars flying bison fly overhead,as the buldings burned around him.Fires caused by Zuko and his reckless group of firebenders."BACK TO THE SHIP! DON'T LOSE SIGHT OF HIM!"
Shortly afterward the Unagi,a massive water snake,rose up out of the water with the Avatar on it's head and shot water all over the flaming village.Zuko and his soldiers were left standing there getting soaked by the water.
Xemone said"...Told ya...again..."
Zuko then got back on the ship,still soaked and watched as the Avatar jumped back onto his bison and flew away.
"...Oh you sure showed me..." Said Xemone sarcastically.
"SHUT UP!!!" Zuko then marched into his quarters yelling "FOLLOW THAT BISON!!!" and slammed the door.
Xemone sighed then said "That Prince needs to be taught a lesson in patience..."
The ship then turned and headed in the direction of the Avatar...


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The Lone Earthbender
Chapter 4

Zuko awoke and got dressed.A few days earlier they lost the trail of the Avatar's flying bison.They were now following purely off estimation.
Zuko went to the dining quarters to eat breakfast.Iroh soon joined him.
"Where's Young Xemone?" Asked Iroh.
"...Who cares?" Snapped Zuko.
"...Has she even eaten this entire trip?"
"I don't know.I don't monitor her eating habits"
"Perhaps I should bring her some eggs..."
"Do whatever you want Uncle..." Said Zuko as he started to eat.
Iroh then grabbed a plate and got some scrambled eggs and brought it to the bow.
Xemone was sitting at the bow staring intently at the ocean ahead.Trying to see if she could still sense the Avatar It's not use...I can't sense him unless the Avatar state is activated...She then heard Iroh come up behind her.
"Greetings young Xemone" said Iroh cheerfully.
Xemone just kept staring ahead.
"I noticed you hadn't really eaten anything since you came on this ship"
"....It's fine.I figured the Prince would get angered if I ate "his" food and we haven't docked for a while so I haven't been able to get anything myself but I'm fine...."
Xemones stomach growled.
"You may be fine but your stomach sure isn't.Here I brought this for you" Iroh then showed Xemone the plate of food.
"....Hm..."Said Xemone unassuredly as she looked at the food.
"It's fine,believe me.It's actually quite delicious."
Iroh then smiled at her and she took the plate and started to eat.
"Is it good?"
"Yes....Thank you..." said Xemone with her same monotone voice.
"So tell me...Why do you pursue the Avatar?"
Xemone stopped eating.
Iroh looked at her then looked away and said "If your motives are personal then I won't urge you to answer."
Xemone then continued eating.
"You know...My nephew really isn't as bad a person as he comes off"
"Hmph...Really?" said Xemone sarcastically.
"He's just....been through a lot..."
"I'm sure he has...." Xemone said with the same sarcastic look on her face.
"You seem like you've been through a lot as well...Maybe too much..."
A few minutes later Xemone finished eating and gave the plate to Iroh saying "Thank you again...."
Iroh said "I guess you WERE hungry" then he laughed but the laughter quickly ended as Iroh got a sad look on his face as he caught a glimpse of Xemones empty cold eyes and said "You're very welcome"
Iroh then got up and left.

As noontime arose,Zuko walked onto the deck with one of his soldiers.The soldier came up to him and said "We're low on provisions sir.We should find some land and stock up before we run out."
Zuko snapped "We don't have time! We might lose his trail!"
Xemone said below her breath "Yes...the invisible trail that doesn't exist..."
"Be quiet earthbender!You want to find him as well so don't go making sarcastic comments!"
"Tell me something Prince.Does this sound logical to you? A small army that can hardly stand their own at best of health and least of hunger and thirst,so starve them and dehydrate them for a bit so you can follow a trail that doesn't exist so that in the unlikely event that we do cross paths with the Avatar you'll have a nice starving,dehydrated mediocre army to fight against the Avatar?Master of all 4 elements?"
Zuko then got and extremely frustrated look on his face but then caved and said "Head for the nearest shore!"

A while later the ship arrived on a small island.
"Ok!Hurry up and stock up extremely well!I don't want to have to make another stop for a long while!!"
Xemone then started to walk off the ship.
"Where are you going?" Zuko said agitated
"I have to go stock up too....wouldn't want my tainted commoner lips to touch royal food.I might get a glimpse of heaven and take it all..."
"Yeah?!Well you better hurry because this ship leaves shore in one hour and if you're not back by then we leave!! PERIOD!"
"My heart's breakin'.... " said Xemone sarcastically.
Zuko sighed angrily and went with his soldiers.

Xemone walked through town gathering up food and filled a canteen with water.She noticed the position of the sun.
"Hmm...I think I've been gone for about 45 minutes and I've traveled a ways.I better head back...I shouldn't have ticked him off....that boat's my only ticket off this island and I'm broke."
Xemone started to walk back when she was confronted by three muscular earthbender men.
"Hey look boys,a wandering little girl." said the first man condecendingly.
"Are you lost little girl?" said tha second man with the same tone.
The three started to laugh.
"Hey girly if you hand over all your stuff we won't have to hurt you." said the third man with a threatening voice.
"Have to...want to.Whats the difference?" said the second man.
They started laughing again
"....I'm sorry..." said Xemone in a low voice.
"Huh?Sorry for what?" asked the first man.
"This is my first time on this island so I'm not sure where the support group for people with no brains is being held....Sorry." Said Xemone with an unimpressed tone.
"Little punk!!" Yelled the second man.
The men then attacked Xemone who noticed she had accidentally left her sand gourd on the ship said "Oh well...It's more interesting when it's old school anyway." She then slammed the ground with her palm sending out a shockwave that sent all three men into the air.
"Ah...girly's got some moves...Well let's show her our moves boys..." said the first man.
The men then took stand in a fighting formation and then dispersed quickly surrounding Xemone.
"...I have a boat to catch and I really need to catch it so..." Xemone then slammed her foot send three huge boulders out of the ground and she triple kicked the boulders towards the men then started to run towards the shore accelerated by her earthbending powers.Little did she know that she had only taken out two of the men and the last had dodged the boulder.He then took two fighting hammers and sneak attacked Xemone by hitting her in the back with the hammer.She started to lose consciousness but not before kicking the ground sending the man flying yards away.Xemone then fell to the ground,unconscious...

A while later,Xemone woke up in a daze.
"Ugh...Stupid robbers....Oh no."
Xemone then looked up at the sky and saw the sun.
"I've been gone for a good 3 hours!...That means the boat's as good as gone now...and so is my main mode of tranportation besides my legs....Ahhh! I forgot my sand gourd was in that ship!This couldn't get much worse..."
Xemone then walked back to the shore hoping she could stow away on another ship on the shore,maybe find someway to take it over so she can navigate herself to the Avatar, if she could be so lucky.She arrived at the shore and,much to her surprise,the ship was still there.
"Wow...Guess he must be a slow shopper..." said Xemone.
Xemone then ran onto the ship to find Iroh standing on the bow.
"You look exausted young Xemone.Did something happen out there?"
"....I got ambushed by some theives but I defeated them...one of them knocked me out for a good couple hours or so..."
"Ah so that's what took you so long?"
"Yes."
"...Zuko seems to have found a lead to the Avatar's whereabouts by some fire nation soldiers who have heard some rumors from a small legion of firebenders on another shore,"
"....Well at least we're not sailing blind anymore..." replied Xemone in her same monotone voice.
"Zuko's been very eager to leave ever since he came back an hour or so ago."
"...Yeah well---Wait a second...He's been on the ship for that long and he has information on the Avatar's whereabouts and he's just waiting here?"
"Yes Zuko's been putting off leaving for some reason.He seemed very frustrated but kept making up excuses not to leave."
Xemone got a confused look on her face.
Zuko then yelled from the wheelhouse "You lucked out earthbender!I've had some delays to contend with so we couldn't leave.You're very fortunate earthbender!Another couple of minutes and you would've been stranded!!SET SAIL!!!"
The ship then left the harbor and Xemone returned to her regular spot on the bow.
Xemone stood silent for a minute then thought........He just doesn't make sense.....
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« Reply #4 on: November 17, 2007, 07:44:10 pm »

You gonna post 'em like dis?
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« Reply #5 on: November 17, 2007, 07:51:22 pm »

You gonna post 'em like dis?
Like.....what? o.o
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« Reply #6 on: November 17, 2007, 07:55:20 pm »

Like how you be posting 'em. Wait, that makes no sence, sorry. XD
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« Reply #7 on: November 17, 2007, 07:58:09 pm »

Like how you be posting 'em. Wait, that makes no sence, sorry. XD
Is it formatted oddly or something?I thought I got all that ironed out o.o
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« Reply #8 on: November 18, 2007, 04:35:44 pm »

The Lone Earthbender
Chapter 5
EDIT-MY APOLOGIES.I SEEM TO HAVE SKIPPED 2 CHAPTERS X_X I SHALL POST THEM AFTER EDITING.ONCE AGAIN,MY APOLOGIES.^__^;;

Xemone awoke to the sound of firebending blasts.Zuko was practicing with Iroh teaching.
"....*sighs* Can't you practice later....and away from me?" Asked Xemone
"You're lucky I even let you stay on my ship and it's MY SHIP.MY RULES!"
Zuko then shot a fireblast over Xemone's semi-conscious head.
"Oohhh....Scary....Ahhh...and stuff..." Said Xemone sarcastically.
"Either shut up or wake up...and then shut up"
"That made no sense..."
"SHUT UP! Uncle,Teach me the next set!"
Zuko then continued on with his training and Xemone lazed on the bow waiting to arrive at their destination;the last sighting place of the Avatar...

Later,Zuko finished his training and decided to rest at the stern of the ship.
Xemone then went to the stern and asked "So you never told what this tip was....Where are we going and who tipped you off?"
"I'm sorry,am I required to share imformation with exiled earthbenders?"
"No,but apparently it's a law that all banished fire nation princes have to be total jerks who don't posess the ability to answer a simple question even when no possible answer given could have any ramifications whatsoever...."
Zuko gave a snarl and said "You know nothing about me or my reasons for banishment so you can just keep quiet"
"Well you know nothing about why I was exiled so you can keep quiet too..."
"YOU'RE the one who asked ME a question you don't tell me to be silent!!!"
"....I just asked a simple question.Could you act like you have SOME sense of humanity in you and just answer it?"
"If you must know a couple fire nation soldiers were talking about seeing the Avatar and his friends in a small earth kingdom city.Apparently he and his little friends helped to free a bunch of earthbender prisoners...so we're going there to see if we can pick up his trail again..."
"Hmph..." Xemone then walked away.
Zuko then got up and started to walk away when he heard an explosion.
"What was that?!?"
A fire nation ship then appeared firing fireballs at Zuko's ship.
"What the!? We're not in fire nation waters.There's no reason for fire!"
"10 to 1 that Commander Zhao guy is behind this..."
"EARTHBENDER!!.....That's....possible I guess...RETURN FIRE!!!"
Zukos firebenders then shot fireballs at the opposing ship.Nothing seemed to cause much damage to them,The opposing ship being much larger and more rugged.Xemone attacked using her sand gourd and took out one of the opposing ships fireball launchers but was then interrupted by an explosion to her right.
"Ergh." Xemone then noticed a burn mark on her right shoulder.
"I think I have enough scars!" She then took her sand and bended it under her feet and flew over to the enemy ship.Xemone started taking out enemy firebenders as Zuko continued to fire from the ship.The enemy then shot a fireblast at the ship blowing Zuko off the ship,into the ocean below.Zuko was unconscious and sank into the water...
Xemone was then knocked off the enemy ship after recieving a firepunch to the stomach.Xemone was hazy,not only that but she didn't know how to swim.She then spotted Zuko slowly sinking to the ocean floor and got an idea.She then hardened her sand gourd into a rock and she plummeted to the bottom while wrapping herself and Zuko in the rock so the pressure wouldn't crush them.Running out of air,she stomped her feet and two giant rock spikes then erupted from the ocean floor breaking through the water underneath the enemy ship piercing the hull and sinking it.Xemone then stomped her foot again to raise the part of the ocean floor that was holding her and Zuko to above ocean level and dropped them back into the ship.Lying the still Unconscious Zuko on the damaged deck.
"....That was fun..." Xemone then took some of her sand and fished out a firebender from the sunken enemy ship."Why did you attack this ship?It's a fire nation ship so you couldn't of thought we were water tribe or earth kingdom....unless you knew the prince was on board but even then you're not allowed to attack him while on non-fire nation waters...Who sent you?"
The firebender then said "I'm under orders not to tell."
"Ok then..." Xemone then took some sand from her sand gourd and wrapped it around the firebenders feet and hardened it to stone and grabbed him by the neck and held him,hanging over the bow.
"Have a nice swim then...."
"WAIT WAIT! IT WAS COMMANDER ZHAO!! HE TOLD US TO SINK PRINCE ZUKOS VESSEL!!!"
"*under breath* point to me...*out loud* Yeah well apparently you weren't smart enough to realize that now that you've given me that information that anything Zhao is going to do to you when he gets his hands on you is 100 times worse than me drowning you...."
Xemone then bended the sand back to its original form and dropped the firebender back into the water.The remainding crew of the enemy vessel then started to swim away.
Zuko was still unconscious with his Uncle over him saying "Prince Zuko.Can you hear me?Zuko?"
"....Let me try...." Said Xemone.She then stood over him and waited for a second then.....slapped him repeatidly.
"Ugh ugh ugh UGH! OK OK!!! GEEZ STOP IT!" Yelled Zuko.
"He's awake...." Said Xemone.
"What happened?"
Uncle replied,"You got knocked into the water,as did Xemone,but Xemone destroyed the fire nation ship and saved you."
Zuko turned to Xemone and gave a very unemotional "Why?"
"....Because they were hurling fireballs at me.....duh...."
"NOT THAT YOU IDIOT WHY DID YOU SAVE ME?"
"Because if I didn't the ship would lose it's captain and then they'd probably go back to the fire nation to say you died or something and I don't have time for that to be honest...."
"Selfish earthbender...who sent that ship!?"
"Stop yelling you're giving me a headache...Zhao sent them..."
"Figures....I'll deal with that later....For now lets keep sailing..."
"Hmph..." Xemone then walked to the bow and sat down as per usual....

*on camera* Ahem I wanted this to be the equivalent of episode 6-Imprisoned and since Zuko appears in that episode I figured I should write out a comical end to this chapter.And so I give you...some crappy ending to this chapter... o.o
Xemone and Zuko landed at the earth kingdom shore.
"Hmmm...." Zuko then spotted a traditional water tribe engagement necklace on the ground.He then picked it up and and stared into the sunset with the necklace in his hand and his ponytail flowing in the wind with dramatic music behind him.
"......Ummm....What are you doing?...." Asked Xemone.
"What?" Said Zuko.
"You're just standing there with your hair flowing in the wind aren't you going to say something?"
"Uhhhh....Yes..."
"....Ok....What?"
".....Let's go get the Avatar...."
"....Well I could've told you that....What do you have in your hand?"
"A necklace.I think it belonged to that waterbending girl that's always hanging around the Avatar"
"Ohhhh.....Any reason you're now wearing it on your wrist as a bracelet?"
"NO!I JUST DON'T WANT TO LOSE IT IT COULD BE A VALUABLE ASSET!"
".....What!?....you're planning on using a necklace as a hostage or something?"
"No...."
"...Then what?"
"....I'm....not entirely sure...."
"....You're stupid..."
"SHUT UP!Let's get going."
Zuko and Xemone then walked back to the ship.

Told ya the ending sucked o.o

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« Reply #9 on: November 18, 2007, 05:13:01 pm »

I was being a dumbass. Sorry sis!!!!! ^_^;;
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« Reply #10 on: November 19, 2007, 06:18:47 pm »

I accidentally skipped chapters 6 and 7 so I deleted 8 and 9 to make it in order. o.o
Sorry about that. ^__^;;
Chapters 6 + 7 will be up soon.
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« Reply #11 on: November 19, 2007, 06:57:48 pm »

The Lone Earthbender
Chapter 6 part 1




Zuko starting looking for Iroh who had said he was going to go off on his own for a while to relax.Zuko ran into Xemone who was lying in a tree by the base Zuko and his soldiers set up.
"Earthbender,have you seen my uncle?" Asked Zuko.
"I spotted him this morning as he left....*Yawn* He went west I believe...." Said Xemone lazily.
"How about you stop being useless for 10 seconds and help me find him?"
"*under breath* I wasn't the one unconscious drowning while MY ship sank..."
"What was that?..."
"Fine I'll help you..."
Xemone the jumped down and slammed the ground sending a small shockwave to knock Zuko over.
"....Ouch" Said Zuko.
Xemone responded sarcastically "Oops sorry...sometimes my bending gets the better of me..."
"Bending?I just thought you put on a few pound--" Zuko was then knocked away again by a bigger shockwave Xemone sent with her fist.
"Did you say something?"
"pain in the neck...Let's just go..."
Zuko and Xemone then went off into the woods to find Iroh.

"Uncle!....Uncle!!" Yelled Zuko.
"Hey...I think I heard something over there..." Said Xemone.They then went over to investigate.
"Uncle?! Uncle!"
Zuko and Xemone then saw Iroh,lying in a hot spring.
"....Scarred for life...Thanks..." Said Xemone.
"Uncle we need to move on.We're closing in on the Avatars trail and I don't want to lose him."
"*under breath* Again..." Said Xemone.
Zuko shot Xemone a quick angry look then went back to Iroh.
Iroh said "You look tired Prince Zuko.Why don't you join me in this hot springs and soak away your troubles?You can join us as well if you'd like Young Xemone."
Xemones said "Naked in a hot spring with and old guy and an angry emo....pass..."
"My Troubles cannot be soaked away!IT'S TIME TO GO!"
Iroh responded "You should take your teachers advice and relax a little.The temperature's just right.I heated it myself." Iroh then shot steam out through his nose to demonstrate.
Zuko blew the steam away and said "ENOUGH! We need to leave now.Get out of the water!"
Iroh then stood up.
Xemone and Zuko both went "ARGH!" as Zuko turned away and Xemone covered her eyes.
"Seriously I have enough issues as it is..." Said Xemone.
"On second thought,why don't you take another few minutes?But be back at the ship in  half an hour or we're leaving without you."
Zuko and Xemone then walked away.Iroh then went back in the water to relax....

Later on that night Zuko went searching for Iroh who hadn't come back yet from the hot spring.He went back to the hot spring thinking Iroh had just fallen asleep in the spring and went to get him with a couple of his soldiers.
Iroh was not at the spring..
"Uncle!UNCLE WHERE ARE YOU!?" Yelled Zuko.
One of Zukos soldiers said "Sir,maybe he thought we left without him."
"Something's not right here." Zuko then noticed a strange rock formation in the spring.
"That pile of rocks!"Exclaimed Zuko.
"Maybe there was a landslide sir." Replied the soldier.
"Land doesn't slide uphill...Those rocks didn't move naturally.My Uncle's been captured by earthbenders!."
Zuko then ran back in the direction of the ship.

A few moments later he found Xemone lying on a rock formation sleeping.
"Earthbender...." He said to the lazing Xemone who was seemingly asleep."Earthbender....EARTHBENDER!"
Xemone then stuffed a baseball sized rock in his mouth and said "It's semi-Acceptable to wake me up violently during morning hours since that is when you're supposed to wake up,but now it's nighttime and I'm tired...goodnighT!"
Xemone then plopped back down on the rock and tried to get back to sleep.
Zuko spit out the rock "Spfft spfft ech...LOOK! Uncle Iroh was taken by earthbenders!"
"....and you're not capable of getting him back by yourself Princey?"
"I never said that but I don't know how many of them they are and I don't want my entire squad going with me and.....*under breath and talking pretty fast* You're a pretty good earthbender and I could use some back up....."
Xemone then sat up and said "Fine...Let's go find him...I haven't had any decent fights against earthbenders in a while so I should be entertained..."
Xemone and Zuko then went off in search of Iroh leaving the other soldiers to watch over the ship and camp....Taking a Komodo rhino with them for transportation.

The next morning...
Xemone and Zuko were still out looking for Iroh.
Xemone sighed.
Zuko then spotted something on the ground. "What's that?"
Zuko stopped the Komodo Rhino and got off. Zuko picked up a shoe that was thrown on the ground.
Xemone said "Is that Irohs?"
Zuko sniffed it and cringed "Yup...that's Uncle Iroh..."
They then got back up on the Rhino and rode off.

A while later they found some ostritch-horse tracks to follow in softer dirt.The Avatar's flying bison then flew overhead.
"Hey princey Look..." Said Xemone.
"....The Avatar..." Said Zuko.
Zuko then started to turn the Rhino towards the flying bison but stopped to look at the ostritch-horse tracks and was caught deciding whether or not to find Iroh or to go after the Avatar....
Xemone then said "Well,Which way are you going?The Avatars bison will be out of site soon."
Zuko looked at the bison then looked at the tracks and became silent.

After sunset Iroh was trapped by the earthbenders who had gotten fed up with his trickery and firebending and decided to smashed his hands with rocks to stop his troublesome bending.
One of the earthbenders then earthbended a huge boulder and hovered it over Irohs hands and started to drop it.Xemone and Zuko then jumped off a overhanging cliff and as Xemone fell she punched the rock into dirt.Zuko then kicked Irohs chains and broke them.
Iroh said "Excellent form Prince Zuko."
"You taught me well" Replied Zuko.
"and very impressive Xemone." said Iroh.
"Hmmm..." Said Xemone with a rather happy yet uncaring look.
The earthbender soldier then said "Surrender yourselves.It's five against two."
"They're right it's not fair..." sighed Xemone
The earthbender then smirked.
"...You should get a couple more earthbenders so you can actually stand a chance..."
"WHY YOU!" The earthbenders then attacked.Iroh used his chains impressively to smash the rocks,Zuko fought with his firebending and Xemone attacked full on.
The battle went on with Iroh,Zuko and Xemone winning.They knocked them back again and again until Xemone caught a glimpse of a symbol on one of the earthbenders armor and she froze in her tracks.
"Earthbender! What's wrong earthbender?! ATTACK!" Yelled Zuko.
Xemone started shaking all the while staring blankly ahead until her scleras(The white parts of youe eyes) started to become cloudy until they turned black and her red eyes started to glow.
Iroh stopped and said "What is happening?"
The earthbender became confused as well as Xemone started to glow black.
Xemone then disappeared and suddenly reappeared within the blink of an eye in front of one of the earthbenders and easily earthbended him away smacking him into a cliffside imbedding him a few feet within it.
Zuko said "....What...is she?"
Xemone then smacked her foot on the ground as 2 small horns appeared on her head and flung herself into the air,Iroh then figured out what she was going to do  and grabbed Zuko and jumped onto a cliffside clinging to it as she came shooting herself down to smack herself superman-style into the ground creating a wicked shockwave that sent the other earthbenders flying.She then stood up and bended 4 huge boulders and shot them towards the earthbenders,smashing them as they fell back down to earth some unconscious...some dead....
Zuko then said "What's going on Uncle?"
"I don't know..." Replied Iroh.Xemone stood silently,the ground she stood on stained with blood,then turned her head towards Zuko and Iroh with the same soulless evil look in her eye. "...But I don't think she's done yet..." continued Iroh.
Xemone then smacked the cliffside causing it to instantly crumble.Zuko and Iroh then fell to the ground.Iroh used his chains to wrap up Xemones feet,tripping her to the ground.
Iroh said "Zuko! Get her hands!"
Zuko then got some rope from the earthbenders ostritch-horse and tied up her hands.
Iroh said "She can't earthbend no--" He was interrupted by Xemone smashing her head against the ground sending Zuko and Iroh flying.
Zuko shot Iroh a look.Iroh then said "Who knew she could earthbend with her face?!"
Zuko then said "we don't have a choice."
He then grabbed an earthbender fighting hammer from the saddle bag of one of the enemys orstritch-horses and stood over Xemone.He then hit her in the back of the head with the hammer knocking her unconscious...
Xemone's glow then dissapated,her horns went away and she returned to normal.
Zuko then looked at her and said "What....are you?...."



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« Reply #12 on: November 19, 2007, 08:28:16 pm »

I really like it. =]
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The Lone Earthbender Chapter 6 part 2

Xemone started to awake the next morning wrapped in chains by the bow of the ship.
"Ugghhhhh.....Ugh...Hey....Hey! WHAT THE?!" Yelled Xemone.
Zuko then walked onto the bow and said "So you're finally awake,earthbender."
"What gives?!? Why did you chain me up!??!"
"You don't remember?You went berserk last night during the fight with the earthbenders who captured Iroh.You were getting out of control so we had to chain you up but that wasn't good enough so I had to knock you unconscious with a fighting hammer."
"What?!...I see..I wondered why my head felt like your Komodo Rhino stomped on it..."
"Judging by the fact you have no sounds of surprise in your voice I'd say you've already turned into that thing before...What are you really?"
"Nothing of your concern.I just...saw something that triggered a reaction is all..." Said Xemone in a shameful like tone.
"What did you see?..." Asked Zuko.
"A symbol on the earthbenders armor....I regonized it is all." Said Xemone without making eye contact with the young prince.
"Recognizing a symbol doesn't make people grow horns,glow black and become like a demon..."
"It's a symbol of someone I knew....Look just unlock these chains.I promise I won't attack anybody."
Zuko wavered but then took the key and unlocked her chains.
"I still want to know what you are."
"Don't you have an Avatar to chase?"
Zuko then pointed behind Xemone and toward the sky.
Xemone looked up and saw the Avatars flying bison in the distance.
"How'd did you catch his trail so quickly?"
"One of the villagers nearby was kind enough to lend the information."
"....Knocked some poor guy into a wall?"
"Ahem.......Yes."
"Ah."
Iroh then walked up behind Zuko and said "Ah Young Xemone,finally awake I see.That was quite the adventure yesterday."
Xemone Sat quietly and said quietly "yeah..."
Iroh decided to change the subject then said to Zuko "Sailing into fire nation waters...Of all the foolish things you've done in your 16 years,Prince Zuko,This is the most foolish!"
"I have no choice Uncle."
"Have you completely forgotten that the Fire Lord BANISHED YOU?!?!What if you're caught?"
"I'm chasing the Avatar,my father will understand why I'm returning home."
Xemone then said "Yes because he just seems like an understanding guy...."
Zuko shot Xemone a look then Iroh said "She's right Zuko.You give him too much credit,my brother is not the understanding type."
Zuko then looked into the telescope. "There they are!HELMSMAN FULL STEAM AHEAD!"
Zuko then readied for attack,preparing the fireball lanuchers.
Iroh said while fanning himself "Really Zuko,couldn't you shoot them down with something a little more fragrant?"
Zuko then lit the fireball with his firebending.
"On my mark...FIRE!" Zuko's soldiers then shot the fireball towards the flying bison who then avoided it.
Xemone spotted something ahead.
"....Hey prince...." Said Xemone
"Not now earthbender." Replied Zuko,who was too musy focusing on the Avatar then on what she had to say.
"Princey..."
"I SAID NOT NOW!"
"MORON!!"
"WHAT?!?!"
"As much as I'm disturbed that the only thing that caught your attention was me calling you a moron...LOOK!"
Zuko then looked out to see a blockade of fire nation ships.
"....A blockade." Said Zuko.
"Very good,idiot..."
Iroh said "Technically we're still in earth kingdom waters.Turn back now and they cannot arrest you."
The Avatar's flying bison continued on to the blockade.
"He's not turning around!" Said Zuko.
Iroh replied. "Please Prince Zuko,if the fire nation captures you,there's nothing I can do,Do not follow the Avatar."
Zuko then lowered her head his head and said "I'm sorry Uncle....RUN THE BLOCKADE!"
Xemone said "This should get interesting...."
The blockade then fired tons of fireballs towards the Avatar along with Zuko's ship.
An explosion was then heard on the stern of the ship.One of the fireballs had hit.
An engineer for the ship came out and said "Prince Zuko!The engines are damaged!We need to stop and make repairs!"
"Do not stop this ship..." Said Zuko sternly.
More and more fireballs were launched towards the ship as the Avatars flying bison tried to hide itself in the cloud cover but a few moments later came back down after the water tribe boy fell off the bison.It hit the water in order to save the water tribe boy who had fallen off.
The Avatar had somehow made it through the blockade but now it was Zuko's turn to try to squeek by.
Iroh shouted "WE'RE ON A COLLISION COURSE!"
"WE CAN MAKE IT!" replied Zuko.
Xemone just watched and went "Hmmmm..."
The fire nation ships then cut off their engines allowing Zuko's ship to pass.Zuko and Zhao then caught rival stares and Xemone watched the look in Zhaos eyes.
"Hmph...can't do anything on your own can you Commander monkey-face?..."(NOTE-Commander/Admiral monkey face is my personal nickname for Zhao so I thought I'd make her use that XD)"
Zukos ship then entered fire nation waters and continued chasing the Avatar.
"What's Zhao up to?Why didn't he arrest me?" Asked Zuko in a confused tone.
"I thought it was obvious..." Said Xemone.
"What?"
"He wants to follow you since you'll give him a clear path to the Avatar.He sees you as no threat so he's basically using you...."
"If Zhao wants to follow our trail of smoke then that's exactly what I'll let him do."

Later...
Zuko used a small ship that was hidden within the main ship and started to deploy from the main ship with Xemone.He then looked up at Iroh who was to be controlling the main ship.
"Uncle keep heading north.Zhao will follow the smoke trail while we use it for cover."
Uncle silently nodded.Zuko and Xemone then sailed away,hot on the Avatars trail.
"Earthbender,are you well enough for battle?" Asked Zuko.
"...Yeah yeah..." Replied Xemone.


Zuko and Xemone landed on the shore of the island and got off the boat.
"That villager said the Avatar was looking for a way to contact the previous Avatar so best bet is that he's in the shrine room." Said Zuko.
"...ok.Let's go."
Xemone and Zuko then ran off into the building,after the AVatar.

They ran through the Fire Nation temple and got to the shrine room.
Zuko whispered "Earthbender,I'm going to find some way to grab the Avatar,you go over to the other side and block them if they attack."
Xemone nodded and sneaked over to the other side of the shrine room.

The Avatar was instructed to hide before the sages came to apprehend them.He chose to hide behind the pillars,exactly where Zuko was.Zuko quietly grabbed Aang and ccovered his mouth to keep hsi capture a secret for the time being.
After the sages came upstairs the Gaang grabbed them and refrained them from moving.The water tribe girl then yelled "AANG NOW'S YOUR CHANCE!"
Zuko then came out from behind the pillar with the trapped Avatar and said "The Avatar's coming with me." Xemone then appeared from behind the pillar and knocked the water tribe girl down.As she ran towards Zuko the sages then regained control over the Gaang and the "traitor" sage and chained them to one of the pillars.
Aang then look behind him to see his friends being chained up.He then got agravated and broke free of Zukos hold and knocked him down the stairs.
Zuko yelled "Earthbender! Don't let him get away!"
Xemone then chased after Aang and,using her sand gourd,wrapped the sand around his feet and knocked him down.
Aang said "I don't know who you are but if you side with Zuko and are keeping me from helping my friends..." Aang then blew a huge brust of air at Xemones feet,knocking her down and causing her to lose her earthbending stance,freeing Aang.
Xemone got up quickly and harded some sand into a decent sized rock and bended it at him.Aang then used a burst of air to knock it away but Xmeone just bended it toward him more causing a bending opposite tug-of-war.
The pressure between the bending energy and the air pressure got to be too much and the rock burst back into sand form. with the shockwave blowing Xemone back. Aang then ran towards the open doors to the shrine room which were now closing.He jumped over the monks heads and made it into the room just in time.Moments later light burst from the sides of the door.
Xemone got up with an angry look on her face.
"PRINCE!!" Yelled Xemone.
"WHAT?!" Yell Zuko as he walked back up the stairs.
"Open those doors!"
"Don't give me orders! I was going to do that anyway! Monks get over here!"
Zuko and the firebending sages then tried to firebend the door open(As is the key to opening a Avatar shrine room door) but nothing worked.
"Why isn't it working?! It's sealed shut!" Yelled Zuko,
Xemone walked over and said "The light sealed it...evidentally Avatar Roku doesn't want you to enter..."
Zuko then turned to the fire nation sage "traitor" who helped the Avatar and asked "Why did you help the Avatar?"
He replied "Because it was once the sages duty...It is still our duty..."
They then heard someone clapping.They turned to see Zhao clapping his hands,followed by a legion of fire nation soldiers.
Xemone said "Just what we needed..."
Zhao stopped clapping and said "What a moving and heartfelt performance.I'm sure the fire lord will understand when you explain why you betrayed him."
One of the fire sages bowed and said "Commander Zhao"
Zhao said "and Prince Zuko,it was a noble effort,but your little smokescreen didn't work.Two traitors in one day.The fire lord will be pleased..." Two of Zhaos soldiers then apprehended Zuko and Xemone.
"And this earthbender will be a nice side-gift for Fire Lord Ozai as well."
"Hmph..." Replied Xemone sarcastically. "What am I,a consolation prize?"
Zuko shouted "You're too late Zhao! The Avatar's inside and the doors are sealed!"
"No matter...Sooner or later he has to come out.." Replied Zhao.
Zhaos soldiers then readied themselves at the doors.
Zhao said "When those doors open UNLEASH ALL YOUR FIREPOWER!"

A few minutes later Xemone sensed something.
She then said "He's coming...but he's got backup as well..."
The doors then shined and bursts of light came out as the doors opened.The light disapated and Zhao shouted "FIRE!!"
He and his soldiers then shot all the fire power they had at the door but standing behind it wasn't Aang it was Rokus spirit in the Avatar State overshadowing Aang.
Zhao became shocked as Roku's spirit easily bended away the attacking fireblasts,sending them back towards the firebenders with the resulting firewave melting the chains,freeing the Gaang along with Zuko and Xemone.
"The Avatar will destroy this temple!We have to leave NOW!" Yelled one of the sages.
Zuko agreed and they ran out of the temple as it was collapsing,dodging molten lava and falling rocks.They ran onto the beach and back into the ship.

Afterwards,Zuko took his telescope and watched the Avatar escape from the wreckage that was the fire nation shrine and fly away on his flying bison,As Xemone sat in anger over the fact she had missed her chance yet again....
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The Lone Earthbender
Chapter 7

Zuko decided to train in a sparring match with one of his soldiers.Xemone sat on the bow of the boat as usual.
Zuko was winning the sparring match but just then the boat swiftly turned causing the boat to lean and sending everyone to crash into the wall of the ship.
Xemone said ".....Ow..."
Zuko said "Someone's changing our course"
Zuko went up into the wheelhouse and yelled at the helmsman."WHAT IS THE MEANING OF THIS MUTINY?NO ONE TOLD YOU TO CHANGE COURSE!"
Iroh then said "Actually someone did...I assure you it is a matter of utmost importance,Prince Zuko."
"Is it something to do with the Avatar?"
"Even more urgent.It seems I...ugh lost my lotus tile..."
"....Lotus tile?"
"For my Paisho(sp?) game.Most people think the lotus tile is insignificant,but it is essential for the unusual strategy that I employ."
Xemone said "You changed our course....for a game piece?"
"See you,like other people,Underestimate it's essential value,just give me ten minutes to check the merchants at the shore,hopefully they'll have the lotus tile in stock and I can get on with my life."
Zuko then got agravated and breathed fire into the air.
"Iroh,he was calm--.....not angry for 20 minutes why did you have to ruin that?" Xemone then walked away as smoked filled the room and Iroh responded."I'm lucky to have such and understanding nephew."

Later on at sunset hours after Zukos ship hit shore...
Xemone and Zuko had spent all day searching the shops by the docks for Irohs game piece.
Zuko and Xemone were standing angrily next to Iroh as he said. "I've checked all the shops on this pier,not a lotus tile in the entire marketplace."
Xemone said sarcastically "It's such a joyous feeling,knowing that this entire day was a total waste even when our main goal for that 10 MINUTES!...was to find a game piece.."
Iroh then said "That's not true.I always say the only thing better than finding something you were looking for is finding something you WEREN'T looking for at a great bargain!" Most of Zukos soldiers then walked in front of them carrying armloads of stuff Iroh had bought.
Zuko said "You bought a sogei(sp?) horn?"
"For music night on the ship...Now if we only had some Woodwinds(I honestly have no clue if this is right but it's what I heard..)" Iroh then walked away.
Xemone said "You know...a lot of the time I wonder 'How can Iroh put up with YOU!' but at times like this I gotta wonder how you put up with him..."
"Patience...." Replied Zuko.
"....So THAT'S why you have none left..." Said Xemone surprisingly jokingly.
"Hmph...Let's go earthbender..."
Xemone and Zuko then followed Iroh who then pointed toward a merchant ship."This place looks promising!" They all then went into the ship.
Iroh spotted a jeweled monkey and said "Oooohhhh that is handsome.Wouldn't that look magnificent in the galley?"
Xemone then sighed as she became very agravated.
Zuko then overheard the merchant saying "We lost the water tribe girl and the little bald monk she was traveling with."
"This monk,did he have an arrow on his head?"
The merchant replied "Yeah what of it?"
Zuko then demanded "I'll show you what of it..."

Later,Zuko,Xemone and a legion of pirates the merchant/pirate was with set sail on the spare boat that is within the main ship.Sailing besides the pirates ship.
The pirate asked "Shouldn't we stop and search the woods?"
Xemone replied "Why?....Is he going to be waterbending some dirt?"
The pirate replied "huh?"
Zuko said "What she means is that there's no point in stopping.They stole a waterbending scroll right?"
The pirate replied "Uh-huh"
"Then they'll be on the water..."

Later that night...
Xemone said "I hear something..."
Zuko said "What?"
"......Splashing water...rather violent splashing water..."
"Where?!"
"Over there by the shore...." Xemone said as she pointed towards the shore.
"Hmm...Head to the shore!" Commanded Zuko.
Zuko's ship then stopped on shore and Xemone said "Whoever was splashing stopped...."
"Ugh you mean he's gone!?"
"...No I mean..." Xemone then spotted something out of the corner of her eye then nudged one of the pirates and pointed to a spot behind a bush and he snuck away unnoticed.
"You mean what?" Asked Zuko.
"I mean shut up..." She then took Zuko and hid as she heard the bushes rustling and a girls voice gasp then quickly run away only to be grabbed by the pirate who was instructed by Xemone to stand there.
"Now I mean move!" Commanded Xemone.
Xemone and Zuko then ran towards the water tribe girl who then smacked the pirate in the face with water via her waterbending.Only to be stopped by Zuko who then grabbed her by the wrists and said "I'll save you from the pirates."
"Must've just been her practicing waterbending then.The Avatar wouldn't of had time to run away while she saw us."
Zuko said "Tie her up!"

Zuko's soldiers and the pirates then tied her to a small tree on the beach and Zuko said "Tell me where he is and I won't hurt you or your brother."
"GO JUMP IN THE RIVER!" Shouted Katara.
"If she won't cooperate then why don't you show her your...."Secret weapon"" Xemone then snickered.
"Shut up earthbender!"
Katara asked "Earthbender?...Ive seen you before.You were with Zuko at the Avatar shrine in the fire nation.Don't tell me you curropted some poor earthbender into being your lacky,Zuko!"
"...Ahem...for one:I am not his lacky...in anyway.His ship is my main mode of transportation to find the Avatar is all.Second-You don't have to be fire nation to be curropt...Thirdly-I am NOT...some poor earthbender...forth...I'm getting sick of everyone calling me "Earthbender" my name is Xemone..."
"So you're with Zuko on your own will?" asked Katara.
"I wouldn't go THAT far.You gotta do what you have to to get what you want.I want the Avatar and he can give me better means of finding him and faster means of getting to him."
"Why do YOU want Aang?" asked Katara with an attitude.
"My reasons are none of your business water tribe girl"
Zuko then interrupted "Enough..." Zuko then got oddly kind and said to Katara "Try to understand,I need to capture him to restore something I've lost.My Honor.Perhaps in exchange I can restore something YOU'VE lost." He then showed Katara her mothers nacklace that she had lost back after she met Haru.
"my mothers necklace!How did you get that?!" Asked Katara.
"I didn't steal it if that's what you're wondering."
Xemone then said quietly to herself "Yeah he only found it on the ground and used it as a bracelet..."
Zuko ignored Xemone and said "Tell me where he is!"
"NO!" Shouted Katara.
The captain of the pirates then shouted "Enough of this necklace garbage!You promised us the scroll!"
Zuko then pulled out the scroll and held it over his right hand as he firebended in his right hand."I wonder how much this is worth"
The pirates then all gasped and said "NO!"
"A lot apparently...Now you help me find what I want,you'll get this back and everyone goes home happy.Search the woods for the boy and meet back here!"
The captain then said "Fine..." and walked off with his crew into the woods...

The next morning the pirates returned with the Avatar and the water tribe boy tied up.
Zuko said "Nice work..."
Zuko then walked towards the pirates to start the trade-off.
Katara then said to Aang "I'm sorry Aang.This is all my fault."
Aang then said "No it's not."
Xemone then said "Actually it kinda is..."
Katara then shot Xemone a look and Aang asked "Oh you.I remember you.You're the earthbender who helped Zuko before."
"My name is Xemone...if anything why don't they say "Girl" "You're that girl"?"
"Why are you helping him?You're not fire nation right?"
"I'm not any nation.I'm me...and I have my reasons for needing to capture you..."
"What?"Asked Aang.
"Let's just say that if I can strike the right deal with the prince over here...by nightfall....you'll be dead...."
Aang then gave a surprised look but was interrupted by Zuko demanding "Give me the boy!"
The pirate captain then said "You give us the scroll!"
Sokka then said "You're really going to hand over the Avatar?For a stupid piece of parchment?"
Zuko then shouted "DON'T LISTEN TO HIM! HE'S TRYING TO TURN US AGAINST EACH OTHER!"
The captain then asked "Your friend is the Avatar?"
Aang then nodded and Sokka popped up saying "Sure is!And I'll bet he'll fetch a lot more on the black market than that stupid scroll."
Zuko then yelled "SHUT YOUR MOUTH YOU WATER TRIBE PEASENT!"
Sokka then continued "I'm just saying it's bad business sence.Imagine how much the Fire Lord would pay for the Avatar.You guys would be set for life!"
The captain then said "Keep the scroll!We can buy 100 with the reward we'll get for the kid"
Zuko then said "You'll regret breaking a deal with me."
Zuko and 2 of his soldiers then attacked the group of pirates with firebending and Xemone earthbended two pirates into the water.
One of the pirates then attacked with smoke bombs,covering a huge batle under cover of smoke,as more of the pirates used more smoke bombs.
Zuko was then knocked out of the smoke and he then took the scroll and put it back on his belt.Just then he was attacked from behind by the captain who was now wielding a sword.They then started a one-on-one fight.In the middle of the battle one of the pirates took the scroll but then Xemone jumped out of the smoke and grabbed it from him only to be stolen by the Avatars lemur.
"Errr..." She then noticed the Avatar had escaped the battle and was trying to get away.
"Not this time..." She bend-ran(That's what I'm calling earthbending accelerated running) towards them only to be tripped by one of the battling pirates.She knocked them away with her sand and tried to continue on but just kept getting caught up in more fighting.
She then finally escaped the battle and ran towards them.
Iroh interrupted the captains and Zukos fight,grabbing Zukos ponytail and the captains arm. "Are you so busy fighting that you cannot see that your own ship has sailed?!"
"We don't have time for your proverbs uncle!" Yelled Zuko.
"It's no proverb!" He then pointed to the pirate ship that was setting sail.
The captain then shouted "Bleeding hog-monkeys!"(WTF?! XD) Zuko then laughed as the captain ran to catch up with his runaway ship.
Xemone said after she realized she was too late to catch them "Never heard the prince laugh before....it's creepy...please stop......"Xemone then noticed something else of interest in the river then continued "Actually you might want to."
"Why?" Asked Zuko.
"You know that karma thing?"Replied Xemone.
"Huh?"
Zuko then turned and noticed the pirates sailing off in his spare ship,mooning and mocking him from his own ship.
Zuko then ran to catch up to HIS runaway boat as well.Leaving Xemone who then got an exausted look on her face.
"Come on you two!" Yelled Zuko.
Xemone and Iroh then ran after Zuko.

Zuko stopped at a cliff overlooking a waterfall and sw the wreckage of the two ships.
"MY BOAT!!" yelled Zuko.
Xemone sighed heavily and sat down at the cliff.
Iroh then caught up and caught his breath.He then put his arms in his sleeves.
iroh then laughed and said "Heh you two are really going to get a kick out of this...The lotus tile was in my sleeve the whole time!" he said as he pulled the lotus tile from his sleeve.
Xemone then said "You have got to be freakin' kidding me...."
Zuko then lashed out and took the lotus tile and threw it over the cliff.
Xemone said "....Thank you.....So very much...."

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