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« on: April 11, 2008, 08:38:33 am »

hey, i wrote some of this stuff ages ago and there were others but i cant find them right now, but post what you think anyway

Wind
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The blossom flows between the trees,
Something living,
Something breathing.

The Grass dances beneath its breath,
Something soft,
Something graceful.

It roars across the ocean,
It soars through the skies,
Blowing, Billowing,
Rushing,Racing,
Screaming, Soaring.

the boughs of an elm creak, the leaves of a willow fall.
The fields flow.
The leaves spiral, the tree whistles.


The giant sleeps.




oh and heres another one ( ts a haiku, for those of us less poetically inclined)

tears
Gladness and Sadness
in a hot ball of passion
falling from the flesh
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i was born knowing everything about everything,  its a side-affect of being awesome

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fine what would you do with a twinky?

Make it esplode.
Or, other things.


You wouldn't still happen to have that twinkie? I'm hungry.
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I did stuff to it.

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« Reply #1 on: April 11, 2008, 03:07:58 pm »

See I promised I would check them out...
Your poetry is lovely...so full of passion and emotion...
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« Reply #2 on: April 11, 2008, 03:14:17 pm »

yeah, first comment.  thanks ky, i do have loads more, i wrote them down somewhere but i cant find them.
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i was born knowing everything about everything,  its a side-affect of being awesome

I DONT UNDERSTAND THE UPRISING OF LHS

fine what would you do with a twinky?

Make it esplode.
Or, other things.


You wouldn't still happen to have that twinkie? I'm hungry.
Nope.
I did stuff to it.

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« Reply #3 on: April 11, 2008, 03:17:55 pm »

I hope you get more soon...i look forward to seeing them
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« Reply #4 on: April 11, 2008, 03:19:35 pm »

me too, i reckon theyre pretty good
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fine what would you do with a twinky?

Make it esplode.
Or, other things.


You wouldn't still happen to have that twinkie? I'm hungry.
Nope.
I did stuff to it.

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« Reply #5 on: April 11, 2008, 04:00:18 pm »

Oooo.
I like the Tears one the best.
It's short and deep.
They're both, as Ky said, lovely.
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« Reply #6 on: April 11, 2008, 04:02:16 pm »

yay, i tried not to oversaturate them with obscure words that detract from the poem, which happens alot with amateur poetry
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i was born knowing everything about everything,  its a side-affect of being awesome

I DONT UNDERSTAND THE UPRISING OF LHS

fine what would you do with a twinky?

Make it esplode.
Or, other things.


You wouldn't still happen to have that twinkie? I'm hungry.
Nope.
I did stuff to it.

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« Reply #7 on: April 16, 2008, 08:50:11 am »

Now... this is exactly why I hate the curriculum. We (the students) come up with much better poetry than the crap we're told to study. Nice one, George.
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