The Art of Star

[STARMAN15]

Ok, so I'm gonna try my hand at this poetry bit... I'm going to try and post a new piece a week, but it might vary...

So first piece is one I wrote from Sora's POV in KH/KH2... It has no title as of now, I'm open for suggestions!


Strength of Spirit, Strength of Soul, Strength of Mind
The heart grows stronger as destinies intertwine
Searching for your love-stitch in a tapestry of stars
Wandering endlessly; travels near and far
The promise of the star-fruit in my heart I hide
Your light, your love, as always is my guide


There is no punctuation at the end of the lines on purpose. It's just my style. Please comment!

[STARMAN15]

This is a piece that describes my life right now. I got the idea from the show Air TV.

Lament of the Wings

Wings of Life take flight!
Take me through this, the darkest night
Your awesome brilliance white and sleek
Need lend me escape from sorrow’s deep.
Somehow though you cannot move,
Once again weakness have you proved.
Have you forgotten how to lift me high?
Maybe you never knew how to fly.
The dark is closing, please set me free!
The wings I have once again failed me.

Pointless are the wings that know not how to fly,
Only memories do they carry of times gone by.

[Sonrisa]

Strength of Spirit, Strength of Soul, Strength of Mind
The heart grows stronger as destinies intertwine
Searching for your love-stitch in a tapestry of stars
Wandering endlessly; travels near and far
The promise of the star-fruit in my heart I hide
Your light, your love, as always is my guide


There is no punctuation at the end of the lines on purpose. It's just my style. Please comment!

I love it!!
lol, I better calm down.
I love it because: A. It's really good. And I like the subject (Sora's POV). Fits well. and B. It's about Kingdom Hearts. ^^ *major fan-girl here*

I'm not really good with commenting on stuff, so, yea.
But really, it's a great poem.
And, for suggestions...Some more KH related poems would be nice. ^^
Like, maybe Kairi and Riku's POV.